Fame is a capricious mistress
anonymity a faithful spouse
most flirt with temptation
but die miserably in the arms of faithfulness.
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2020/04/30/reenas-exploration-challenge-133/
Fame is a capricious mistress
anonymity a faithful spouse
most flirt with temptation
but die miserably in the arms of faithfulness.
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2020/04/30/reenas-exploration-challenge-133/
Your shortest poem so far. Am I right?
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Apart from some senryu/haiku written earlier, yes!!
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Cool. I always welcome change.
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Change is good for it stops us from becoming predictable!
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Absolutely.
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well said….
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Thanks, Nabeela.
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Existential food for thought, Punam!
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Heartfelt……๐๐
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Thanks, Ivor. ๐
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Succinct!
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Sometimes brevity says a lot.
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Exactly! To many words can spoil the message
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i echo Sadje above me, just blew me away!
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I felt if I keep it short, it would be more effective! Thanks Gina.
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short sweet and powerful ..
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Thanks, Kate.
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You’re an Angel, creating miracles with the wand, your pen.. No words.. ๐๐๐ผ๐๐ค
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Debika, you often leave me speechless with your comments…๐๐ผ๐คโค๏ธ๐ท
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Courtesy : Your creations Punam.. ๐ค๐
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The 2nd line is my fave pick!!
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Ah! I think I know why. Thanks Rhen.
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Perhaps you do, we are getting to know one another ๐ โค Hey, I just discovered a cool dance group–are you familiar with Maritime Bhangra? Amazing, energetic–and they do a lot for many charities. I'd like to post one of their videos…if you agree it would be a good thing. Lots of love to you โค
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So we are! ๐
I have heard about the group. Please, go ahead and post.
Love back to you. โค๏ธ
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Great! I try to check with someone when I want to feature something/someone from another culture…these days it’s too easy to offend, and it would break my heart to be thought insensitive๐๐
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Reminds me of another song you may have heard of … “maut mehbooba hai meri, saath lekar jaayegi”
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Muqqadar ka Sikandar…yes…death as beloved and I wrote of fame as beloved.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Limelight …. By Punam
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Thanks Reena.
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Thereโs such a tension between fame and anonymity dear Punam, and with such few words you capture so much. So cleverly done โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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I am glad you think I could do that, Rachel. Thanks a lot, my dear. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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“to die miserably in the arms of faithfulness.” Isn’t that true, my dear? Beautifully said.
xoxoxoxo
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Oh wow what an interesting take on fame and privacy..
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Thanks Mich. ๐๐
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Thanks a lot.
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Oh wow what an interesting take on fame and privacy..
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Thanks a lot dear. ๐๐
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So true..
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Thanks dear.
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That little poem has such a punch. I loved it ๐๐
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Thanks a lot, dear Christine! ๐๐
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Excellent piece!
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Thanks a lot, Eugenia.
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You’re welcome!
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Fantabulous ๐๐๐๐.
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Thank you, Kritika. ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
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Pleasure is mine. ๐
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Wow! This is nice. ๐
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Thank you so much! ๐
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You are welcome. ๐
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So much said in so few a words. Brilliant!
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Thanks a lot, Moushmi.
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