Today’s (optional) prompt is brought to us by the Emily Dickinson Museum. First, read this brief reminiscence of Emily Dickinson, written by her niece. And now, here is the prompt that the museum suggests:
Martha Dickinson Bianchi’s description of her aunt’s cozy room, scented with hyacinths and a crackling stove, warmly recalls the setting decades later. Describe a bedroom from your past in a series of descriptive paragraphs or a poem. It could be your childhood room, your grandmother’s room, a college dormitory or another significant space from your life.
(Long forgotten memories come rushing with a whoosh taking me back in time to this very day, a fortnight spent in a temporary home at dad’s worksite.)
A whitewashed frame of brick and mortar
with a tin head atop
no beds, no dining table and chairs
just basic amenities to get by
one room for us siblings
I can still smell the sandalwood incense
mom would light, to keep the insects at bay
mattresses on the floor, covered with coarse cotton sheets,
were our four poster bed
from the ceiling fan hung the mosquito net
turning our sleeping alcove into a fortress
where many a wars were fought
temporary sheer curtains made
from mom’s old blue net saree
fluttered prettily in the windows
a world map on one bare wall
would keeps us on our toes
for every evening after dinner
dad would love to flummox us with geography quiz
sometimes over a glass of whisky he would relate
entertaining anecdotes shared by a German coworker
during the day it was our wrestling arena
also a place of verbal duels,
a haven from the heat outside
where we would venture in search of frogs and chameleons
a cosy nook to retire after the evening spree of cycling
every night the mango tree outside
rustled in the breeze playing a symphony
with the hot tin roof
that would keep us awake for a while
some nights, when the power would go off
we would read under the sheets
with torches under our chins
when it got too hot, the sheets were sprinkled with water
to keep us cool and the heat bearable
watching fireflies from the window
was our favourite night time activity
we didn’t have much then but were happy
today kids have everything yet…
Amazing!! You have described everything so beautifully🌹
And the last line…these days children have everything….yet
They still want more…. and are still not happy…..having everything has made them oblivious and they take many things for granted…sadly
The poem was wonderful! Keep writing🌸❤
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Ah! Ishita, you said everything that I left unsaid! Thank you so much, beautiful! Your appreciation always brightens my day. ☺️❤️
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I am honoured that my appreciation make your day Punam❤ Your poems make mine😊❤
Lots of love🌹
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Lots of love to you too, my dear. 🌷❤️😊
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❤🌹
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Punam, what a jewel. This is gorgeous poetry. It’s poetry for the soul. For it caress the soul and the soul rejoices. How beautiful.
Stay blessed sweetheart 💕
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Ah! That is high praise, Gabriela and you make my heart dance with joy! Thank you so much, dear poetess for your heartwarming words. 🙏🏼❤️🌷😘
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My pleasure. Take good care of yourself sweetheart and keep enchanting us. 🤗💕🌸💐🌿
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You too, take care.
If you leave such lovely compliments, nothing would stop me from writing. 🌷❤️😊
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That’s my girl ❤️🤗❤️🌸😊
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🙏🏼❤️🤗
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🤗❤️🌸💕
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Amazing.
You’ve captured that feeling perfectly🖤🖤
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Ah! Thank you so much! 💙💙
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You’re most welcome 🖤
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Your conclusion shows everything isn’t everything. I enjoyed your recollection very much. My grandparents were dirt poor but their home was a family hub of liveliness. I spent a lot of time there and it was a much happier place than my own home, which was very quiet.
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Li, I have very happy recollection of my childhood, though we didn’t have much.
Thank you so much for enjoying it and sharing your experience. ❤️
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My pleasure ❤
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A beautiful poem with a captivating description! Bravo!
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Thank you so much, Sue. 😊
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Awesome poem punam, what lovely words, a heartfelt piece! ❤
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Thank you so much, Carol. So glad you enjoyed it. ❤️
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Yesss.. That ‘yet’ the word.. Today’s children have everything, yet……
You nailed the conclusion so subtly.. Loved it.. 🤗😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
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Thanks a lot, my dear. 🤗❤️🙏🏼
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This is so vivid! You took us there.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Glad to share a glimpse.
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You’re welcome 😉
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Just beautiful, and sad in way. Today’s kids don’t know a thing.
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You are right but they think they know more than us! Thanks, Bo.
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Which only shows how little they know.
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This is a gem of a poem, Punam. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Sunita. ☺️
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As I recall no one had a lot of stuff back then. We created our own worlds, and I, too, remember it with great happiness. (K)
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I am so glad this resonated. Joys came from whatever we had.
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what delightful adventures to recall, you took me there!
You ending says so much ❤
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so much to love in your delightful poem Punam, but the geography quiz has my heart
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Ah, Gina! Thank you so much for your lovely words. That was the highlight of my growing up days.
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This is really well penned
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Thanks, dear Muntazir.
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You made it sound so humble, yet so rich!
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Thank you so much…you read it beautifully. ❤️
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You’re welcome 😊
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WOW, Punam–you have an incredible gift for describing place and person. I’m totally amazed and impressed. This is such a lovely piece, right up at the top of my faves list ❤
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Aww! My heart is so full after reading your words! Thank you so MUCH for your constant encouragement. 💖💖
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Oh good! A full heart, and full stomach–if we have those we are Much Blessed💕💟💖 (My stomach is full of pizza–a rare treat!! 🙂 )
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Pizza!! Mmmm..delicious! We are blessed, indeed. ❤️
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You like pizza too? I’ll bet you make your own 🙂
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Who doesn’t! I do sometimes but prefer to order! 😀
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I tried making my own once…terrible idea! I like ordering better too…I have 2 slices left, want to share? 🙂
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I am sure they must be over by now! 😒
Maybe next time! 😁
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Hahaha–I devoured them 🙂
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No worries. Next time. 😊
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🙂 🙂
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You made me smile throughout this – the genuine happiness, not about material possessions but about love and family.
“watching fireflies from the window
was our favourite night time activity”
It is not possessions that bring happiness, and you have illustrated this in such a beautifully heartwarming way ❤️❤️
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Rachel, you won’t believe this but I too was smiling as I wrote this! Very happy memories. So glad that it made you smile. Thank you so much. ❤️❤️
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You made me happy reading this Punam..you were certainly a happy kid growing up regardless of what you dont have..
And oh, watching fireflies at night is something that i never did when i was a kid …not even now..i wonder where are all the fireflies now?
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Yes, indeed Mich. Very happy childhood. Thanks a lot.😊
Sadly, no fireflies in cities now.
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Oh, that’s true no fireflies in the city now..and i heard from other people in some of our provinces back home, fireflies are gone too
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Which is so sad!
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😐😐😐
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Nostalgia hit me hard! The simple pleasures of life. I remember thinking as a kid that mosquito nets would keep away the ghosts when I would visit my aunt in the city of Calcutta! We never used them back at home 😀
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Yes, those simple pleasures of life! Haha! Those mosquito nets would be used all over Bengal and Bihar and there was a sense of safety sleeping or sitting inside it. 🙂
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Your memory reminded me of a book of lullabies that I would sing to both my children and grands.
The rhyme is called the Cradle-song by Sarojini Naidu from the Baby’s Bedtime Book by Kay Chorao:
Cradle-Sogy by Sarojini Naidu
From groves of spice, /O’er fields of rice,/ Athwart the lotus-stream,
I bring for you, /Aglint with dew, /A little lovely dream.
Sweet ,shut your eyes, /The wild fire-flies,/ Dance through the fairy neem;/
From the poppy-bole/ For you I stole/ A little lovely dream.
Dear eyes, good-night,/ In golden light /The stars around you gleam;
On you I press/ With soft caress/ A lovely little dream.
(Not all are lucky enough to know of fire-flies – to me they signal the beginning of summer…And I am fortunate that they fill my back yard most summer evenings.)
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Jules, how lucky you are to have fireflies fill your backyard! I agree, not all are lucky.
Guess what! That was one of my favourite poems by the nightingale of our country! Thanks for reminding me.
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