The ghostly galleon was a pale shadow in the skies
nervous moonlight peeped from behind the clouds
silvery, slithering snakes streaked down to the seas
the lone, ageing vessel valiantly tried to stay afloat
wailing waves walloped the deck again and again
the master helmed the ship stoically
though his heart was grim at what lay ahead
as the sea-spray hit his face once more, she tasted like memory
of all the good times he had had on her calm waters
and he smiled
her turbulent, troubled flashes of temper did not frighten him a bit
sea was his beloved, he could read her every pulse
yet, he admitted to self candidly, she could be capricious
he wouldn’t mind dying in her arms
but he knew they had many more years of togetherness
he had learnt to starve the fear that gnawed in his gut
never letting the hungry beast devour his mind
he used it to keep the fire in his belly alive
he had been successful in the past
it was a battle he was going to win this time too
he straightened his spine as he saw another wave coming
no wonder he was considered a legend on the seas!
(https://aroused.blog/2020/04/25/friday-fun-sailing/
What do you see # 26- 20 April 2020
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2020/04/23/reenas-exploration-challenge-132/
Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: Tuesday, April 22, 2020
Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – “Legend” – April 20, 2020
https://jademwong.wordpress.com/2020/04/23/poetry-moonlit-love/)
You are telling me a story here Punam. And you are telling it in your beautiful words and with your unbelievable talent. Great piece.
xoxo
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Ah Gabriela! I am so happy you enjoyed my little story! Thanks a lot, sweetheart. Your words fill my heart with joy. β€οΈπ·π€
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My pleasure sweetheart. I truly enjoyed it. You are so talented.
xoxo.
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What a valiant soul. I love this story. Love the optimistic and positive outlook of your captain.
Thanks Punam for joining in the challenge.
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Sadje, thanks a lot for liking the story.
It’s a pleasure to join in your prompt.
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Always a pleasure Punam
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Brilliant storytelling, Punam! The captain, a valiant soul, was an optimistic leader and truly a legend. Thank you so much for participating.
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Thanks a lot, Eugenia! A pleasure to participate.
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My pleasure!
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Lovely tale, hope people take a leaf out of the good Captain’s book eg follow his example!
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Thanks a lot, Kate.
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welcome sis!
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βhe wouldnβt mind dying in her arms
but he knew they had many more years of togethernessβ
This got me. Beautiful, Punam.π
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Sailors have a deep abiding love for the sea. Thanks a lot, Nina.β€οΈπ
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You show the special relationship a captain has with their vessel. It reminds me of a line from the song, “Ride Captain Ride”: “my life, my lover, my lady is the sea.”
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Ah! That’s such an apt song! Thanks a lot, Li. π
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You’re welcome π
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Oh! the love affair with the sea, told so well.
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Thanks a lot, Dawn.
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You’re welcome, Punam.
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I love it! What a great story and how beautifully told
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Thanks a lot, Pallavi.
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A glorious old sailor’s story… this needs a a great sea shanty…this was written by my dear friend Terry Fielding, back in 1974…
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Thanks a lot, Ivor for your words and wonderful share. π
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Postive and brilliant….a great one Punam π
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Thanks a lot, dear Radhika. β€οΈ
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Brilliant depiction of battles – both internal and external!
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Thanks a lot, Reena.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
O Captain …. by Punam
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Thanks.
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Oh yes yes YES! LOVE this!! So visual, Punam…and sensual (I could taste the salt!).
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Great! Thank you so very much! β€οΈ
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You’re very welcome β€
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I know how much sailing is a feature in your life, and how you describe the effects of the turbulent seas but the live and faith in the boat as an indestructible force. This line particularly got me:
βas the sea-spray hit his face once more, she tasted like memoryβ
What a metaphor for relationships and love – able to withstand anything.
So so so so so gorgeous β€οΈβ€οΈ
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It is, Rachel. I have seen the fury of seas and how sailors handle it. Thank you so much for your appreciation. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Youβre such a good story teller. O captain my captain.
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I love that poem, Bo. Thanks so much.
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You nailed all the prompts Punam…as alwaysπππ
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Thanks a lot, dear Mich. Know that your support means a lot. ππΌπ€β€οΈ
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I loved this one, brilliant.
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Thanks a lot, Moushmi.
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You’re words always come to life in the most wonderful and powerful ways Punam my dear! π
“nervous moonlight peeped from behind the clouds”….I love this line i could truly see the Moonlight peeping out from the clouds and of course brought my beloved character Luna to mind.ππππ€
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Thanks a lot, dear Jenna. I am glad you enjoyed those lines about your favourite. πβ€οΈπ
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You’re very welcome my dear Punam! π€ β€οΈ
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I love the way you describe the images! I can almost feel the rocky boat.
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It feels good to know my words could do that! Thanks a lot Parikhit. π
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This is beautifully written. I love your choice of words and the rhythm and flow of the language. Captain Ahab comes to mind.
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Ah yes, captain Ahab! π
Thanks a lot.
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Beautiful, brilliant take on all the three prompts. beautiful story telling.
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation, Indira.
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My pleasure, dear.
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