For days I stared at the blank page, contemplative,
as I tried to gather the universe in metaphors
pen paralyzed, poised plaintively
words voiceless, suddenly amiss
endless time on hand stretching like a lazy cat
wasted on a futile pursuit of awol ideas
left high and dry by the secretive, masquerading muse
disgusted with the fickle-minded creativity
I wander off to the balcony, my favourite perch
only to be met with the baleful gaze of
the occasional visitor, the one-eyed crow
the nearby mango tree is half stooping
laden with flowers and a bevy of brown bulbuls
who trill merrily, a chorus so uplifting
that I stand there transfixed, as they soar and alight
uncaring of the murder of crows that has gathered
no question of a parley between the two parties
I decide to be a neutral observer
after a hectic and raucous conference
the crows cede space and fly away
the bulbuls fill my heart with a fluttering of their wings
I know now why my caged soul has lost the courage to soar
this once in a lifetime situation has clipped my wings
but my voice is very much in my control
and one day I will surely sing.
Amazing
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Thank you! 🙏🏼
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A nice overview of the current situation. Great poem Punam.
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Thanks a lot, dear.
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You’re welcome 😉
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You see a mango tree from your balcony?
Great read.
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I do, Bo. Just uploaded a pic I took yesterday. It is not a very good one though!
Thanks dear.
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Jeus, it’s huge.
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It is, Bo.
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Wonderful reflection on reflection on today’s difficult times. Excellent take on all prompts and thank you for joining in.
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Thanks a lot, Eugenia. My pleasure to join in.
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😉
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Just lovely… I think many would relate to this.
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Thank you so much!
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masterful 🙂
You could also link this to my Friday Fun – now prompt … it vividly depicts what so many are feeling ❤
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What a beautiful reflection Punam…one day you will sing again…
And that shot of the mango tree from your balcony says a lot Punam.
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Thank you so much, Mich. ❤️😊
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Thank you so much, Kate. 🙂
Done. 👍🏼❤️
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Another 5-Star, Triple-Wow piece! I love “awol ideas” and “masquerading muse”–super!!! And the finale…so good, part plaintive/poignant–and determinedly hopeful–HURRAY!!!
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Fully agree.
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Thank you, Reena.
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Omg! I love 5-star ratings!! You are so generous, my dear. Thank you so very much. 🙏🏼❤️🌷
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And I love to hand them out to worthy writers, haha!! You’re an amazing writer, easy and enjoyable to read everyday!💖💖💖
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🙏🏼❤️💖
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Voice and mind both are in control. Writing should not suffer bcoz it does not need tools and colors that one can run out of.
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Oops! I am sorry this went off prompt then!
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Nothing is off prompt, just a different take.
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Inspiration, a bird…… By Punam
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Thank you.
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You paint a vivid picture. This is beautifully written.
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I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot, Miriam. 💙
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Punam I love your stream of consciousness, such raw emotion pouring out, the squawking of the birds can get deafening.
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Li, thank you so much. ❤️ I do love to hear the birds chirping but as you rightly said it can get deafening sometimes! But I prefer it to honking of horns anyday!
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You are very welcome and agreed!
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❤️
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I’m all eyes for your poem and mango tree, Punam. I hope those birds leave some fruit for you. Apparently the red-whiskered bulbul is a notifiable pest species in Australia! So glad they are friends where you live because they look awfully sweet.
Thanks for linking into the Corvid-2020 weekly challenge.
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Tracy, I won’t get any fruits! Those on the ground floor lay claim to it. Pests!! They do look very sweet. We don’t see them here very often. In fact many Indian cities are seeing birds not seen earlier.
My pleasure, dear.
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Amazing poem Punam. Beautiful yet so poignant
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Thanks a lot, dear Lorraine. ❤️
I hope you are well.
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this poem is perfect for the dark times we are in right now…
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Thanks a lot, Victoria. 💙
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My heart soared as I read this a Punam, and it kept soaring until I reached the amazing ending of this beautiful poem:
“this once in a lifetime situation has clipped my wings
but my voice is very much in my control
and one day I will surely sing.”
I don’t believe you will ever stop singing dear friend and your heart will always reach the heights of that mango tree. And what a beautiful luscious tree it is. I’m feeling very lucky to see this. My first mango tree!! ♥️♥️
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Rachel, your words have the power to uplift the ordinary to something special!
It is a huge, lovely tree! ( though my pic does no justice to it)
Thank you so much, dear. ❤️❤️
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Beautiful 🌼
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🙏🏼 Thank you, Kritika. 🌷
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How beautifully you have captured the little nuance of life around us 🙂
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Thank you so much. 🙏🏼
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I like this a lot!
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Thanks a lot, Liz. 🙏🏼
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Excellent take. Delightful, very beautifully written.
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Thanks a lot, Indira. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Very much.
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🙏🏼
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Delightful ending.
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Thanks a lot.
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Nature is true source of inspiration. Thanks for sharing the beautiful post. 🙂
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So it is! Thank you kindly! 🙂
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