Write a poem based on an image from a dream. We donβt always remember our dreams, but images or ideas from them often stick with us for a very long time.
The aubergine rolled up as fast as it could
plonking itself on the topmost shelf
the green chilly glowered at me
threatening to bite my fingertips
my eyes had turned saucers by now
the potato just stood its ground
and admonished me for eating too many carbs
I think I then heard my jaw drop!
right then the onion barged in
querulously asking me why I sliced it so thin!
I gingerly stepped back,
with a scream rising up my throat
when the ginger accosted me
and warned me against using it in writing
I turned with my heart in my mouth
and just as I was about to flee,
a bunch of french beans swung by on a vine
tying me tightly to the refrigerator
I opened my mouth to let out a wail
when a tomato affixed itself on my face
they all threatened me in unison, “Better stop cooking us
or else tonight we will cook you up, champion!”
as I thrashed my legs trying to free myself, while shivering all over
someone shook my shoulders not so gently over and again
I cracked open one eye and met my husband’s exasperated gaze
I got up with a start to find myself on my bed
scarcity of vegetables in lockdown is sure giving me nightmares
I refuse to cook any longer
I fear being threatened by my utensils next!
( I literally dreamt of vegetables a couple of days ago! π)
Oh, those vegetables are damn rotten Punam. ππ²
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Haha! Right conclusion, Ivor! π
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Hahaha. Marvelous, my dear.
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A bit of insane fun! Thanks a lot, Bo.
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Ahahahaha!!! I loved this so much. Aside from the lockdown line, which makes it extra funny in these times, the whole poem is a nightmarishly-hilarious metaphor for what it’s like to be a writer, at times, too. ;)) Just so good. Thanks for the smiles, Punam.
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Lol Mission accomplished!! I wanted smiles around, Nadine! Yes, the writing part can be nightmarish too. I am so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much, my dear. ππΌβ€οΈπ
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As I have a strong alliance with the Brussels Sprouts, I fear no uprising, as long as those intransigent Asparagus don’t raise their pointy little heads. Well writ!
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Beware of those Asparagus spears! Though I won’t count on strong alliances at these times! I thought the same about those darned beans!!
Thanks, Ron.
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Amusing poem. Well written.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot, Indira.
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Welcome, dear.
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Haha…this is good fun! Well done.
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Thank you, Heather. I may add from what I wrote on your post, gratitude and laughter will help us. I am delighted you enjoyed this. β€οΈ
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Laughter is a must!
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Hahahahaha.. Loved this.. ππππ
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ππ me at my silly best! Thanks so much, dear. π€πβ€οΈ
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That’s the best of you.. At least for the silly me.. Lol.. ππΌπ
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This is a splendid composition. I love it.
xoxo
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Thank you so much, dear G! Some fun during lockdown.
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My pleasure sweetheart. Fun helps a lot these days.
Take good care of you. Stay safe,
xoxoxo
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What a vivid recollection of dream. Must be scary being threatened by veggies. Great poem.
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Thanks, Sadje. Well, dreams can be like that.
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I usually forget them as soon as I wake up.
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Most times I forget too!π
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I just disemboweled an aubergine…I wonder what it was thinking!
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Lol! Now it cannot think, thank god!π
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oh my hat what an amazing imagination … that is craving for you when they start talking to you π
This challenge is really highlighting your outstanding talent sis β€
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Haha! Cravings certainly talk to us!
Thanks a lot, dear sis! ππΌβ€οΈ
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I’ll blame you if my veggies attack me tonight π
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Hahaha! Better keep a knife and chopping board handy! π
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no way hosea, I’d do myself a damage for sure π
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Lol then stay away from them. π
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Oh my goodness–I shouldn’t laugh, as it sounds quite frightening! You’ve written it so cleverly, I was engaged from first line to last…as usual!! π I’m also giggling quietly as I imagine your husband’s face!!
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Lol I am so happy that you enjoyed it! Laugh away, it is supposed to be fun! π
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I didn’t realize until later in life that I’m a very visual person–so it’s always interesting to read anything, and “see” what pops into my mind! Blessings to you and your family as we start another week in this time of “what’s next?” β€
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Ah! That must be so interesting. Yes, another week and who knows what’s in store for us! Stay safe, dear. β€οΈ
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Thank you. The surreal quality continues, no? We must stay not only safe, but positive–and share the love virtually β€
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Absolutely! β€οΈ
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πI was going to say, what did we do for inspiration before Coronavirus?…but we had plenty!! π
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We sure had plenty then too! π
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Yes, I think we’re endless fountains, overflowing wells! π
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Lol it seems so!
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It’s a GOOD thing!! π π
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That is a great way to turn the vegetables into characters.
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Thank you so much! It is possible in dreams. π
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Of course you did! Sounds like a true story. π
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Kind of, Tracy! All I remember is that I got up flustered and that there were some veggies involved! ππ
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Oh my goodness!!! How much do I love this, I hope it is not followed by a utensils sequel – much more lethal.
The ginger π
βwhen the ginger accosted me
and warned me against using it in writingβ
I hope you realise what youβve done.
Priceless Punam, absolutely priceless!
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Yeah, the ginger!! ππ I am so happy you enjoyed the madness.
No, I hope the utensils have no reason to mutiny! π
Thank you so much, my dear. The reactions to this verse have been priceless. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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I am going to be eyeing my vegetables suspiciously πβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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Gosh! I have made everyone wary of their vegetables! πβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Sounds like it might be with good reason! π₯¬π₯¦. You faring ok?
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Yes, Rachel, I am fine. I am used to being on my own. I was telling Tracy the other day, when I used to sail with my husband, sometimes the voyages would be 45 days long! With interaction with just 4-5 people, I enjoyed my stays. There was no social media then.
But yes, I did dream about vegetables, and no, they were not so belligerent. π
Thanks sweetheart for your concern. β€οΈβ€οΈ
I hope you are fine.
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Ok, sailing with your husband for 45 days? I am tucking this information into my treasure trove of info about my dear friend.
Like you, I donβt mind the isolation… but, it does get quite full on with the kids and trying to work and educate etc all at the same time! Iβm trying to look at it as an opportunity and mostly i do see it this way, apart from the childrenβs fighting!! Then all of a sudden I am stir crazy ππ. Lots of love to you β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Oh, I am glad to share with you! Not just 45 days, I have sailed many a times but sometimes from one port to the other would take 45 days. π
Yes, educating kids and keeping them from fighting does leave me bit frayed too! How old are yours? Mine are in their teens and yet behave like toddlers! π
You also have work to do! Much love to you too, my dear. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Wow, I did not know you sailed like that… I am now so intrigued!
My two are seven and nine…. they behave like toddlers when they fight too and I canβt imagine what theyβll be like as teens!
I can do most of my work in late afternoon and evening (currently from home) so itβs not too bad. Just makes for long days! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Oh! At that age they fight a lot! From my own experience I can tell you they will continue to fight in teenage but you won’t be required to play referee so often! π β€οΈβ€οΈ
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I hope youβre right! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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I too hope I am! β€οΈβ€οΈ
I had written on their fights sometime ago.
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Ahh loved it!! Thank you dear friend! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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My pleasure, Rachel. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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such a masterpiece! you had me laughing and eyeing my veggies with suspicion! great one Punam, there is no one like you!
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Aww Gina! That is so sweet of you to say. I am so happy you had a good laugh, and no, don’t eye them with suspicion…they appeared in my dream again and promised to be good! Lol
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Hahaha I loved this!
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Thanks a lot, Moushmi! π
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I was laughing all throughout the poem…and even shared to my daughters and told them it will happen to them too if they dont eat vegetables..
Lol..πππ
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Haha Mich! I am happy to have made you laugh and thanks for sharing it with your lovely daughters. πβ€οΈππΌ
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great imagination with such great dose of humor
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Haha! Thank you kindly.
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My pleasure π
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A smile in these dark days π
You safe & doing well?
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Yes, Kunal. Have to look at the lighter side. π
Yes, I am safe and doing well. No cases from my locality, yet.
How about you? Mumbai is pretty badly affected.
Stay safe, dear friend.
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So far so good, Punam! Hanging tough, trying to stay positive. ππ½
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Stay positive, Kunal. I am sure we will tide over this together. ππΌ
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Hahahaha, I love this!
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I am delighted you enjoyed this! Thank you so much and also for taking out time to read my posts. ππΌ
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