She sat in rapt attention
at the open air midnight soiree
enthralled by the elegance of the lyrical verse flowing
from the mystic poet’s lips
bathing her parched soul with a longing so intense!
when his ballad spoke of
death and parting
it creased her delicate brow and for a heart-stopping moment
she was awash with a feeling of deja vu
as if listening to her own obituary, many moons ago
when the amethyst sky was suffused with a million celestial bodies
yet the eerie cawing of corvids could be heard
as if her soul had ascended the heavens!
shuddering involuntarily she came back to the present
was it a dream, a nightmare
or a premonition
of the tragedies to befall!
she yearned for days of tranquility when life was not complicated.https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2020/03/19/reenas-exploration-challenge-127/https://jademwong.wordpress.com/2020/03/23/poetry-reunion/https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2020/03/23/what-do-you-see-22-march-23-2020/https://amanpan.com/2020/03/23/eugis-weekly-prompt-elegance-march-23-2020/https://reflectionsofanuntidymind.blog/2020/03/24/corvid-2020-weekly-challenge-1/
Very intense.
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Thanks Bo.
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It is intense and beautiful. Yet it is the way fate and premonition are captured that makes this poem magnificent. P bravo 👏
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My dear G, you fill me with elation with your praise! Thanks a lot, sweetheart. ❤️🌷
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You are so welcome 💕💝💕💐
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Awesome writing. Love it.
Life should be simple, Its easy this way.
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Thanks a lot, Kritika dear! It definitely is easy that way.
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😊
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The power of poetry to transport…
“she was awash
with a feeling of deja vu
as if listening to her own
obituary, many moons ago”
The whole poem has a mystical feel to it. Loved it ❤️❤️
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Yes, poetry can transform and transport! I am glad you found it mystical.
Thank you so much, dear Rachel. ❤️❤️
Hope you are well.
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I’m ok, we are now in full lock down too. Solidarity in isolation huh! Hope you are well too dear friend ❤️❤️
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Solidarity in isolation indeed! Stay safe. ❤️❤️
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Love it all, very powerful overlap between reality or premonition … you are a gifted wordsmith ❤
Take care precious 🙂
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I am glad you enjoyed it, Kate. I am fine, though my poetry is verging to being alarmingly morbid! 🙄
Thank you so much. You too, stay safe. ❤️
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sure am, maybe bright the tone a bit as anxiety is sending many into a vortex 🙂
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Yes, ma’am! 🙂
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good girl … do as you wish 🙂
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Amazing work as always. I loved the obituary part.
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Satyen, your words always mean a lot! Thank you so much. I think that part is central to the poem. I am delighted you liked it.
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You’re always welcome.
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Nightmares and crows. Very unsettling, Punam. It is hard to know what is worse – the nightmares or the reality.
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Yup! I am sorry it turned unsettling. Reality is bad but I remain optimistic. Shall I blame the prompts? 😉
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Yes, indeed. The prompts have a lot to answer for. 🙂
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Lol can’t blame them all the time! I will try to write more positive ones in future. 🙂
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This is so good. It made me feel all that she was feeling.
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Ah! Thanks a lot, Sadje. This means a lot. ❤️
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A pleasure!
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Thanks for including my prompt.
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My pleasure, Sadje.
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🙏
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Intense and powerful. Also, an excellent take on all prompts. Thank you so much for participating.
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Thanks a lot, Eugenia and it is a pleasure to participate!
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😉
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Perfect for these days.
Tranquil times will return. We just have to be patient.
Keep yourself safe.
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Thanks a lot, Andrew. Somehow whatever is happening around is on everyone’s mind. Yes, patience is the key.
I am staying safe, you do that too! ❤️
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Oh that yearning for a life uncomplicated…and yet…
A wonderful image, I could see myself in this. 😊
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Aww Nina,that’s the best compliment one can get when the reader can see themselves in the verse! Thank you so much. 😊❤️
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WOWZA, Punam–this is stunning!!
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Oh my! Thank you so much, Rhen! You made my day. ❤️
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Oh I’m so glad–I love to make your day!! ❤
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❤️❤️🤗
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💕
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Yessssss….. I love it, Punam. Very beautiful, word-sensuality expressed!! 👌😍
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Oh, wow! “Word-sensuality”…I love it! Thanks a ton, dear Nadine! 😊❤️
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as if listening to her own
obituary, many moons ago
I wonder if the concepts of past life regression and deja vu are linked in some way.
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I was thinking on the same lines when I wrote this, Reena. Thanks for the prompt.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Presentiment …. by Punam
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Thanks, Reena.
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How do you do this😍😍😍😍
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🙈🙈💖💖💖🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Inspiring. I’ve been down so long, the only way is up! Unsettling but a joy to read. Thank you Punam 💜
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Yes, Jen! The only way is up. I know it turned a bit morbid but that’s not how I am feeling! Thanks a lot. 💙🌷
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I think you misunderstood me. I’ve been down and you’re poem brought me up. It inspired me 💜 I’m delighted you’re feeling well! You write beautifully.
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I sure did! 🤦My bad!
Jen, if I could, I would hug you! 🤗
You have surely brightened my day! Thank you!! 💙🌷
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I’ve had some happy today too! Now more !! xo (((HUGS!))) 🤗😊💜🌹
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An intense emotion of words weaving all the prompts together Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Radhika. ❤️
I hope you all are well. 🙏🏼
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Its an intense poem Punam and i love how reality is mixed up with some kind of existential beliefs..
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Thanks a lot, Mich. So true…. ❤️
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You put us right there I her body and mind.
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Ah! Thank you so much for your kind comment.
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Thank you for participating this week! 🙂
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My pleasure! 🙂
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May we rise up with dignity to our current challenges.
May all those souls who for what ever reasons have ascended be remembered for their best memories and blessings.
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Jules, thank you for your beautiful prayer! 🙏🏼
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What a thoughtful poem – there is a sense of disturbance – this shall pass
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I hope so too! Thanks a lot, dear.
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My pleasure always dear
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This is so well-written and really chimes with the times. Stay safe 🙂
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I like “chimes with the times”! Thank you so much, Chris. You stay safe too. 🙂
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