The scope of my glorious independence
now confined within four walls
alone and isolated
masked and frightened
I stare into oblivion
reflecting on the hands I shook,
the meetings attended
and the crowded commute
Alone and distant from all now
if only I had kept my distance then!
I now fear for the loved ones
regretting the hugs I shared with them
The question that bothers me most is
“How do we stay focused
when the world around us
is falling apart?”
I can feel the mask of sangfroid slip perilously
into the raging waters of uncertainty
but I will not get mired
in the quagmire self-pity
I will survive and rise
wiser and more determined
Alone I may be in this fight
against an invisible, faceless, wee invader
arising out of nowhere
but maybe, just maybe
having faced the worst
the best will triumph eventually.
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2020/03/12/reenas-exploration-challenge-126/
I’m glad you fixed the issue with comments. I love your poem Punam. Though it is very topical, it can represent many situations in life.
Thanks for joining in the challenge.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Much appreciate your thoughts.
The issue with comments is very frustrating. Most times, after I hit publish I don’t even check until after a few hours!!
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You’re welcome Punam. It’s the same with some of my posts too.
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I hope WP is able to fix this glitch.
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I don’t think so. Not yet anyway. I often check after a post is published. Sometimes a friend points it out.
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but I will not get mired
in the quagmire self-pity
I will survive and rise
Beautifully penned
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Thanks a lot, my dear.
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The best will surely triumph. Glorious mash up of prompts Punam. Once again I am in awe, your poem flowed with ease and intense emotion.
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Your words are always so encouraging, dear Gina. Thank you so much.
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Punam, my like button is not working.
Your poem is so very poignant. Perhaps we will do things differently in the “new” world.
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I do hope, we do things differently in the “new” world and not fall back to our old ways. Thanks a lot, Tracy.
No worries about the like button. 🙂
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It was my browser apparently.
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Ah! Either the browser or the reader keeps acting up!
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And like much else that we have faced in life, this too shall pass. It is the age advantage, labelled ‘maturity’, not ‘decay’.
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Absolutely, Reena! I am sure with the advantage of maturity we will be able to look back at this as a battle that had to be won.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
An unequal fight ….. echo of a prevalent sentiment penned by Punam
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Thank you, Reena.
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You mashed up two prompts and gave us a beautiful reflective poem just in time for all the health crisis we are facing…
So brilliant..
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Thank you so much, Mich. It is on everyone’s mind.
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What a beautiful and positive conclusion to your poem Punam. I am sure, united we’ll all be able to do that 👍🏻
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I am sure too, Radhika. All we have to do is stay calm and follow the do’s. Thank you so much for your encouragement. 🙏🏼
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I don’t know dear. I’m asking myself the same questions.
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No clear answers forthcoming! And we flog ourselves uselessly. Good to know you are back home together. Take care dear.
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I know. Will do. You too.
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We are certainly swimming in the” raging waters of uncertainty”. But, we will find the shore again! Keep well.
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Yes, I am sure we will! Thank you so much. You too stay safe.
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I am so glad your post came through. There must be some WP glitching because others have complained the the “likes” button not working. Plus yesterday, I wasn’t able to see this post.
I feel it’s best to stay calm. This is not the first and will not be the last virus we will encounter. Excellent piece, my friend.
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I am glad too that I was able to fix this.
I agree, panicking and creating a chaos won’t help. Thank you so much, Eugenia.
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😉
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❤💕💕💕… 😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼…
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🙏🏼🤗❤️💞
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I enjoy your perceptions here, Punam.
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I am so glad you do! Thank you so much, Li. ☺️
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You are welcome 🙂
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I love this poem Punam. It’s epic. Your talent shines.
xoxo
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These are the key words from you, dearest Punam: “having faced the worst
the best will triumph”. It is truth!! We will be fine, and in the meantime there is much to learn–what a huge opportunity we’ve been give in the midst of the fearful doom and gloom! Much love, and prayers for the safety of you and your family (as always!) ❤
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Yes, we are all hoping that all will be fine and in the meantime we take precautions and stay calm.
Thank you so much for liking this and as always for your love and prayers. Stay safe, please. ❤️
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You’re welcome always ❤
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Wow!!!! Brilliant as ever, Punam. ⚡️🌪🌟🔥❤️
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Hey again… :)) Sorry I replied so shortly – I was running out the door, when I saw your comment notifications on my recent poems, and wanted to see what I’d missed of yours – I likely shouldn’t have even looked at my phone then, as I ended up commenting too quickly. What I meant by that, is that you’ve taken a lot of intense emotions that are felt by so many people right now, and funnelled them into a very skillful and controlled tornado of thought. Thanks for sharing this heartful art with us. 😚💖 xoxoxo
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No worries about the short reply! 😄 Thank you so much for your detailed comment, though I had somewhat deciphered the emojis! 😄🤗❤️
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😄😘🙏❤️🤗
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🤗😘😉
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Thanks a lot, Nadine. So good to see you here. ❤️😊
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And this is exactly how we stay focused.😊
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Absolutely! Thank you. 😊❤️
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Glorious expression of so many people’s doubts …
this too will pass and we will be stronger, take care sis ❤
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Yes, it will… you too take care. ❤️
Thanks a lot.
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Such hope in your words here, Punam! A ray of sunshine to hold onto during this social distancing phase.
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Thanks a lot, Irma. ❤️ Will social distancing be the new normal…I don’t know! But for now we must all try to be safe.
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Agreed! I hope it isn’t that new normal…but yes, we must do what we need to at this point.
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Best will triumph – amazing 😊
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Thanks a lot, Shantanu. 🌷😊
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My pleasure always
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Great response. Perfect for the times 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Chris. I thought so too. 🙂
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That end gives so much hope to all the readers❤️🤗
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It does feel emotionally awkward to socially distance now. Your poem provides some therapy on this topic.
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Thank you so much. I am glad you think so.
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Social distancing is hard, blessed are introverts haha
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Lol Thanks for sharing this perspective! I wonder if it is becoming too much for introverts too!
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Oh no, me and my wife are one of those. AND WE LOVE IT! 🙂
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Ah! Great. 👍🏼 Though I am not an introvert exactly, isolation has been good so far. 🙂
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Where are you from, here in Croatia they were pretty strict but right now they got loose.
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Croatia is such a beautiful country!
I am from India and our lockdown will continue till mid-May.
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Here is the same. Till 14th complete lock down..but once restrictons are over, i am afraid that Covid 19 will strike again
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Exactly! The same fear is here and considering our large population things might go really bad!
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I feel you.
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🙏🏼
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