Taut, undulating skin vibrates at the silken touch
puckering drunkenly at the merest graze
yielding grudgingly to insistent prod
melting easily at tender strokes
skin on skin creating timeless melodies
reverberating through warm flesh
caressing the soul to sublimity
heart humming hymns ecstatically
unraveling and undressing
hidden depths in flaming colours
gentle, feather like glances
followed by rough and tumble
of visceral manipulation
light and dark sinuous curves
responding to the thrumming call
shadows revealing and concealing
creating ballads on satin skin
satiated yet unsatiated
purring with satisfaction
leaving one hungering for more!
Er…before you let your imagination run wild, this is about deep tissue massage! π
Hmm….well my mind did wander in that other direction Punam π. But seriously this was sensuous and eloquent. Very well done π
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Haha! That was the intention though I mentioned otherwise! I am so glad you enjoyed it, Radhika. Thanks a lot. β€οΈπ
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My questions are. Where is it and can I make an appointment?
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Haha, Jen! You will have to come to India. π
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Damn! Sorry for swearing. NOT! lol π
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Lol! π
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Ummm. Very descriptive. Thank you for rendering clarity at the end. πΉ
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Lol! Just in case. π
Thanks a lot.
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lol I did ask that it be “family friendly” but then if you let your kids have such a sensuous massage, then it must be family friendly! You did mislead us on purpose, you tease π
five stars for ‘naughty’
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While I was posting it, it struck me it was apt for your Friday Fun! π
As you can see, ma’am, it is “family friendly” as far as the language is concerned! π
The five stars will be treasured! β€οΈ
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you tread a fine line … thanks for thinking of the prompt π
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My pleasure sis! And I do veer on the wild side you see! π
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lol first time I’ve heard of that π
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I keep it under covers!ππ
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Love the cadence of this!
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Thanks so much!
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Yeah, sure. π
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Hehe!
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my imagination is still running and gasping for breath! this is just a wow! poem Punam.
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Aww, Gina! Take a deep breath and slow down…it was just a massage…that’s all! Lol
You are priceless, you know! β€οΈ
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haha I am enjoying myself, your words have the power, let it be felt. thank you for the kind words, but I am just reacting to your wonderful writing.
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Ha ha…I was thinking wow racy!
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I am glad this is generating laughs! Lol
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It could go both ways Punam. Both are gratifying.
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Lol yes, Sadje!
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This was very well written, descriptive, sensual yet classy. Great job
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Ah! Thanks a lot. Much appreciated.
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Haha! As a retired massage therapist….thank you for the blush.π
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You are most welcome for the blush! π
And I am glad that a retired massage therapist enjoyed this. β€οΈ
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Now I am smiling. :))
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And your smile warms my heart. π β€οΈ
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PS. Some of the very best massages I ever received were in India. A full body freshly mashed papaya massage. Pure joy and goodness.
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That sounds delicious! We are known for our massages! π
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haha – looks like you got a good masseur – π
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Lol! Indeed, Shantanu! π
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There you go π
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Well, thanks for this explanation.
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Lest I be accused of writing a third rate love poem! π
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What you did not mention was that the masseuse was your husband!! ππ π
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Irma, I thought it was understood! ππ
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Lol! A happy ending for a happy couple! ππ
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Wow! I want what you’re having! π
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Ah, Christine! It is damn good! π
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Lol! π€£
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Raaz batana nahi chahiye thaπ€£
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Love it all, of course…and I’ll make this my fave pick today: “heart humming hymns ecstatically” β€
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Ah! I know why this your fave. π
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Most welcome, my pleasure π
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….is it, though????ππ₯π
I am ignoring your little after thought, and taking this as a beautiful, sensual Ode to the fiery touch on flesh of deep love expressed in poetry. I’ve never read anything like this from you and I just love it so much
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Oh, wow! This is a huge compliment, my dear! I am floored by your words, Ms. Fiery! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Lol ..my imagination did already wonder ..hahaha…nice one Punam…you got me thereπππ
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Haha! I am glad you had a good laugh, Mich. Thank you! ππ
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It was like….i started reading and i said…ohhh….then i read you last commentary and said…oh no dear you got me lolπππ
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Mmm, nicely done. Well I do love a good deep … massage. π
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Me too….massage! ππ
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I missed this!! Goodness, Iβm glad I came back to it! Deep tissue massage, thatβs brilliant, definitely not what I was expecting π, it was a great twist. I do love a great massage, and a great twist. I was left feeling exactly like this after reading your sublime words
βsatiated yet unsatiated
purring with satisfaction
leaving one hungering for more!β
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Haha! Yeah, that feeling of having everything yet wanting a bit more.
This is as close to love poem I can write. π
Thank you so much, Rachel. It means so much to me that you go looking for my posts. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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I thought it had been too long since Iβd read you!! I must have missed the notification.
Iβm glad I went looking, this was well worth it!!! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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What a gorgeous poem. The metaphors are sublime. Tender and passionate.
“skin on skin creating timeless melodies
\reverberating through warm flesh”
I am in love with this poem.
Marvelous.
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Thank you so much, my dear G! Know that when you say “gorgeous” it means the world to me! β€οΈπ·π
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My pleasure, sweetheart. When is gorgeous I say gorgeous πΈπ€β₯οΈ.
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Hello Punam, did you disable the comment section in your latest post? I wanted to leave a comment but i cant.
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Thank you so much for pointing out, Mich.
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I found you via the comments on Rachel’s latest post, and feel thrilled that I did! This poem is sublime, and your footnote, and the wonderful comments, make for an all around good-clean-fun-filled “massage” experience. Just purrrrrfect. πππ»π
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Am I glad you found me via Rachel! She is incredible!
Thank you so much for your lovely compliment. Your presence here and your appreciation means a lot. ππΌπβ€οΈ
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Indeed she is. Absolutely there is no one quite like her. Thank you for these kind and welcoming words! β€οΈπ
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I agree. And believe me your words here have made my day. πβ€οΈ
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Aw thank you so much. That makes my day, to hear that. Truly. π·
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Hahahah, really? “this is about deep tissue massage! π”
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Kasam se, Moushmi! π
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I imagined it to be wild. Loved the sensuality of words. π
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Lol! Thanks a lot, dear! I am glad you enjoyed it. π
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I sure did. And with the title so tempting, jelled with the poems moves.
Awesome. π
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Haha! You are so kind, sweetheart! π€β€οΈ
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My pleasure πβ€
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