The stirrings are slow and sporadic
yet sustained
simmering just beneath the surface
a festering blister under smooth alabaster skin
centuries of civilization
can make hatred appear moribund
as it lies dormant and prone
on the edge of consciousness
then all it takes is a slight nudge
a graze gone wrong
making it come alive with gusto
taking possession like the devil himself
manifesting itself out there in the open
inhaling deeply
not the aromatic, heady scents of compassion
but the dank, putrid smell of animosity
hatred unclad and raw, in bare-bones
scorches in its intensity
frightens in its ugliness
and corrodes completely!
Very well captured this corrosive emotion.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. 🙏🏼
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You’re welcome 😉
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Both beautifully written and true.
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How wonderful to see you here, Paul! Thank you so much.
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Ah, that is powerful and so well written my dear. Excellent work.
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I am touched by your appreciation, dear G! Thank you so much. ❤️
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🌺🌸💝
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The kind of writing I love most. Uncompromising.
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Feels good to hear that!
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I like that it just takes one little nudge for it to take hold.
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That is how it usually is! Thank you so much for reading.
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Unfortunately, some of our leaders (Donald Trump comes to mind) are stoking the flames of hatred and focusing on our differences, separating us, instead of uniting us.
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The saddest part is this is happening in so many countries.
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Yes, that is sad.
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powerfully conveyed, hatred is horrid … we need to love and embrace diversity … so sorry our world is undergoing such radical bigotry!
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It is a sad state of affairs, Kate and I fear for the next generation!
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there will always be good kind hearted people who wont follow that crowd, trust that your children will certainly embrace diversity. There are more ways to learn than modi …
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Yesss…to all you say! ❤️
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Powerfully expressed! Hatred not only erodes the hater but everything in its path. Hate is a four-letter word that should be banned. An outstanding and timely piece. Thank you for participating.
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I totally agree, Eugenia, it should be banned! Thank you so much and it was a pleasure to participate.
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My pleasure.
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Such an incredible description of the evil and destruction of hatred. I especially liked how you conveyed how it can lie there, just waiting for that inevitable nudge into ugly manifestation. Brilliant! ❤️❤️
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I have seen what hatred does to people and it’s ugly! Thank you so much, my dear! ❤️❤️
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Ahhh you’re very welcome 😊
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Lots of vivid adjectives to show how actively evil hatred is.
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Thanks a lot, Li.
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You are very welcome. It’s nice to get recognition in print!
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It sure is!
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Hatred is just like a parasite, corroding our very essence. I am a great admirer of your work Punam and as always you’ve penned another brilliant piece 👍🏻💕
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Radhika, your kind words fill me with gratitude. Thank you so much, dear. 🤗❤️
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Very impacting–both your poem, and the theme, “hatred”.
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Thank you kindly.
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Most welcome.
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This poem actually made my skin crawl, I could feel the hatred in the words you used. So evocative and truthfully written.
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I am seeing a lot of hatred lately, so it was easy to pen. Thanks so much.
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