Day 27: How Did I Get Here
Born in a country rooted in karmic belief
I learnt to accept everything as fated
But then I wondered, is this really life’s brief
Shouldn’t I consider this notion dated
Leaving everything to fate brings one to grief
Not every step that we take can be rated
Sometimes we have to go with the flow
At others you have to take charge to grow.
We are where we are supposed to be
The reins are not always in our hand
Life takes charge of you and me
There is absolutely no magic wand
But we can’t stop working hard you see
Even if nothing goes as planned
I know this much right now I am here
And no way I would like to be anywhere.
(Written for OctPoWriMo)
Poetry Form: Ottava Rima
I would like to wish all of you a very Happy Diwali. I am so sorry I have not been able to visit your blogs or respond to your comments. I promise I will respond in a day or two. Enjoy!
Powerful message, sweetheart. Beautifully written also.
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Thank you so much, dear! I am glad you liked it.
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A very well expressed message. It is mostly in our own hands.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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A pleasure Punam
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Enjoy your time away my friend and Happy
Diwali 😊💜
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Thank you so much, Jen. I had a good time. 😊💙🌺
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Great! Welcome back 🙂 😊💜
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Thank you! 😊💙
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I always like to be somewhere, but I know what you mean.
Wish at times there was a magic wand.
(magical!)
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I won’t deny at times I wish so too! But mostly I am happy at where I am.
Oh yes, that childhood wish for a magic wand remains unfulfilled.
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For so many out there.
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Yess!
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And yes, happy Diwali. Hope you’re enjoying it.
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Thanks Bojana. Had a great time.
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Very clearly expressed.
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Thank you so much.
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Sometimes life does take charge, even when we try not to let it! Wishing you a very happy Diwali!
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Ah, yes! That happens pretty often.
Thank you so much.
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My pleasure.
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The positivity in your poems is infectious. This one is very inspiring. Happy Diwali, Punam 🙂
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What a lovely thing to say, Sunita! Thank you so much. Hope you had a great Diwali too! 🙂
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Happy Diwali ✨✨ to you…
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Thanks a lot, Sarika! Hope you had a great time too! ❤️✨✨
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Incredibly insightful Punam, and I adored this piece……
“Leaving everything to fate brings one to grief
Not every step that we take can be rated
Sometimes we have to go with the flow
At others you have to take charge to grow.”
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Life is like that, isn’t it! Thank you so much, Ivor. I am glad you liked this.
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I LOVE this poem So MUCH!!! Hope you are fully enjoying your Diwali festivities! ❤
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Thanks a lot, dear Z. I will catch up with your other comments and posts soon.
Yes, Diwali was wonderful. 🙂❤️
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No rush, lovely Punam! I’m so glad Diwali was wonderful!! 💖✨
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Beautifully done Punam, happy Diwali! I so admire your philosophy on life! Hope you’ve had a great weekend! ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Rachel. All my poems have taken a philosophical turn because the prompts were such.❤️❤️
Yes, it was a great weekend…family, friends, feasting and fun! Very hectic and now as I am cleaning and clearing there is a feeling of emptiness! Same story every year! 🙂
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Aww it sounds magical. The finish of it sounds very bittersweet ❤️❤️
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All good things come to an end…❤️❤️
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Sadly 😢❤️❤️
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beautifully said … we can change our karma with effort and leadership 🙂
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Wonderful words that resonate with me. Wisdom in life.
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Thanks a lot, Miriam.
I am Punam.
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Hi Punam, lovely to connect with you here.
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Same here.
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Beautiful one.. I feel it’s 50/50 share.. Some written on our forehead, some rest in our hands.. 😇❤💕👌🏼👌🏼
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Kabhi kam, kabhi zyada…both play their role… 😊🙏🏼💞
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True.. Agree.. 👍🏼😉😇👌🏼💕
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