Day 25: White
I
Colour
Is it karma
Non pallor
Not white
Accountable
For plight
Fatal
Dark complexion
Total
Poetry form: Musette
II
Does the colour of my skin bother you?
Does the hue of my skin define me?
Who decided fair is beautiful?
And that dark is ugly?
If beauty is in the eye of the beholder,
Why donβt the eyes move beyond the complexion?
Does the shape of my eye,
My radiant smile amount to nothing?
I am not white but brown
In a country of brown-skinned majority
Yet, men and women alike
Have reminded me time and again
That my skin is of a tone,
That is found unacceptable by society
I didnβt choose my colour
I was born with it
And I proudly flaunt it
I care not what others think,
I grew up looking at it
staring at me from the mirror
This is the colour I am most comfortable with.
(Written for OctPoWriMo)
I have posted two poems today, one in the suggested form, musette and the other in free verse. We were ruled by white men for many years and though we blame them for most of the ills plaguing our country, we are obsessed with white skin.
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Brilliant! Be proud of your color.
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I am, Sadje. Thank you so much.
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Youβre welcome π
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I love your color, all colors and inside is what is the most beautiful β€οΈ
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Absolutely and thanks a lot, dear Christine. ππ
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Because we’re shallow.
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Extremely so, Bojana!
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I have a fair skin But I HATE it when people compare their skin tones with mine . When I don’t give any value to the skin color, they do not realize how beautiful they are in their own skin. I wish everyone looked inside and felt the beautiful hearts within !!!!
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Absolutely! A beautiful heart makes a person beautiful.
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True !!!
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powerful poems and I can never quite get our obsession with the colour opposite to our own!
White fellas sunbake to get a tan, dark people try potions to get a lighter tone … Michael Jackson took that to an extreme … we should be glad to be who we are π
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Exactly Kate! I am very much comfortable in my skin but people around me don’t seem to. Can’t help it!
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I’ve worked with our First Nation peoples children adopted into white families who have scrubbed their flesh back to the bone looking for white … it’s wrong in every way!
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Oh gosh! I wonder when our obsession will end! π
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not until we openly accept each other!
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Yes! That has to happen.
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Until all white people can acknowledge privilege and quit colonizing β- argh. Itβs just not right!! Thanks for sharing your experience with us.
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Absolutely! Thank you for reading and you are welcome.
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I love both of your poems, Punam. My belief on powermongers (i.e. the white men who have ruled and are ruling non-whites and females) is that they practice a dangerous and deadly form of bullying, where bullies single out any easy attribute with which to create an “us and them” dynamic, then set the “us’es” against the “thems”. Two easiest attributes to set up the dynamic is skin color and gender. More difficult for them is wealth inequality, but they have proven so good at bribing the institutions of power that it is getting easier for them. I appreciate you speaking out in your poetry β€
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First of all accept my apologies for the late reply.
I agree, it is a form of bullying. How shallow to make someone feel insignificant on the basis of whatever the reason!
I am so grateful for your detailed response. If only some bullies read it and realise how loathsome their behaviour is!
Thank you so much for your encouragement, means a lot. β€οΈ
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You are very welcome, Punam. I hope one day humanity finds a unifier to draw us all together. Unfortunately it will probably be extraterrestrials landing.
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Maybe you are right! Because right now there is no unifier in sight.
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Wow! I really commend you for producing one gem after another. π
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Pallavi, thank you so much. Words like yours are a great incentive to write better. β€οΈ
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Bravo! Each poem is well scripted and a powerful message!
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Thank you so much, Heather. ππΌ
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A pleasure.
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Lovely writing, and lovely heart and soul–yours. It is shallow and sad that many put value on skin tone, and overlook the countenance from which our souls shine. Blessings to you β€
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I loved both poems. Especially that rant is a home run. Actually, I did start a rant yesterday sitting in the office and could not post after seeing the form. Maybe some other day π
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Thanks a lot, Sunita. You can understand how I feel! I do hope you will post it some day. π
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Reminds me of Shakespeares’ “youΒ prickΒ usΒ doΒ weΒ not bleed?Β IfΒ you tickle usΒ doΒ weΒ notΒ laugh?”
Indeed time never change a bit of how we treat each other.
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Ah! So true, Mich! Thanks a lot.
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Reminds me of Shakespeares’ “if youΒ prickΒ usΒ doΒ weΒ not bleed?Β IfΒ you tickle usΒ doΒ weΒ notΒ laugh?”
Indeed time never change a bit of how we treat each other.
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Wow! These two forms work so well together, your free verse like the flesh on the bones of the musette, but much much more beautiful than my tired brain made that sound. It hurts my heart so much for people to think that the colour of our skin means anything at all. We are all much much more similar than we are different…
I love this, so much dear friend. Sorry I missed it earlier!
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I liked writing the musette but it seemed very bare-boned! Given my proclivity to verbosity, I added the rant like free verse! So, you are so spot on even with your tired brain! βΊοΈ
I have actually always been bemused by people so enamoured of fairness!
Thank you so very much, Rachel. Your words always add on to what I try to say. β€οΈβ€οΈ
Don’t worry about missing out a poem here or there. In November I will fish out all the poems you have not read and share the links with you. π
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