Day 19: Purple*
A deep shade of purple maybe today’s sky
I wish your pain I could mitigate
Don’t remain so distant, let me try!
It breaks my heart when I hear you sigh
Railing against the dastardly fate
A deep shade of purple maybe today’s sky!
Your suffering makes me cry
Let me share your sorrow’s weight
Don’t remain so distant, let me try!
For you I would utter a hundred lie
An infinity for you I can wait
A deep shade of purple maybe today’s sky!
Stop wasting time by asking why
Take all that has been offered, dear mate
Don’t remain so distant, let me try!
Forget the past, present whizzes by
Forgetfulness can be a wonderful trait
A deep shade of purple maybe today’s sky!
Don’t remain so distant, let me try!
(Written for OctPoWriMo)
Poetry form: Villanelle
* The colour purple denotes sorrow and suffering too!
A wonderful poem.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. ๐๐ผ
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Youโre welcome ๐
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Love it
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Thanks a lot, dear Saania!โค๏ธ
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My pleasure, hope youโre well ๐ธ๐ค
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I am well, Saania. ๐ค
How are you?
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Iโm good too, have a lovely Sunday ๐
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You too, sweetheart! โค๏ธ
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Such an endearing poem. That voice…Lovely ๐
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Thank you so much, dear Sunita. ๐
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A great villanelle!!
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Thank you kindly! ๐๐ผ
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You are welcome, Punam!!
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Supportive and sincere, hoping he has courage to share.
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Yes, that’s what one can hope for. Thanks a lot, Li.
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You’re welcome, Punam.
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You are truly Brilliant at writing the classic forms, dear Punam–WOWZA!
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You are wonderfully kind, dear Z! This is the first time I am trying all these forms. Your appreciation is very encouraging. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Well you have totally WOW’d me! I gave up the brain strain, just the lazy poet now ๐ ๐
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Lol I am a lazy poet too. But during the poetry months I make the effort. And it all becomes worthwhile with comments like yours! ๐โค๏ธ
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I am SO glad you encouraged me to “jump in late”–even though I don’t do many forms, the prompts have been a fun workout in OctPoWriMo. You’re an amazing poet–every piece seems so effortless! Blessings to you!! โค
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I am SO glad too that you joined in! You have written amazing poetry for the prompts. Thank you for the blessings! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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You’re just the BEST, truly you ARE!! Such a lovely poet’s heart!<3
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What a lovely Villanelle! Well done Punam โค๏ธ
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Thanks a lot, Christine. โค๏ธ
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