Let’s not talk of the bodymap of heartbreak today
you will bring up that album of memories
containing sepia-toned momentary moments of joy
those halcyon days of young, carefree love
someone else will bring up those ribbon tied letters
musty, yellowing and falling apart
filled with protestations of passion in verse and prose
he will recount that tender, nebulous pain
that grips his heart and wakes him up after all these years
with a fierce longing in the middle of the night
she will talk of the fissures in the relationship
that are still too deep to be filled or bridged
yet she continues to hope for a happy ending
pain seems to be the leitmotif of all love stories
and has been recounted and done to death
But sadly happy love stories are not melodramatic
so let’s not discuss the boring stuff too!
Let’s not.
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Indeed!
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Good point!
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Thanks dear!
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You’re welcome 😉
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That just took my heart away ❤
those ribbon tied letters, they have a lot to tell in them 🙂
I loved it
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Oh, they sure do! Thank you so much for your words of appreciation and presence here. 🙂❤️
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Gosh Punam, the “body map of heartbreak,” unleashed by all those memories, and waking us in the night. This is hard hitting and beautiful ❤️❤️
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Love has a tendency to give us sleepless nights…sometimes out of longing at others out of regret! Thank you so much, my dear friend. ❤️❤️
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Wonderful. I enjoyed this very much 🙂 Thanks for your post
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Thank you, Bushboy! I am glad you did. 🙂
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sweetly poignant … you are a master!
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Thanks sis!🙂
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my pleasure sis 🙂
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The politics of love,
alas, ever so heartfelt
and intriguing. But,
I guess, We could all
do with more boring 😎
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Absolutely, David! I love my boring life! 😀
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So true, Punam. I enjoyed this poem very much.
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Thank you so much, Tracy. I am glad you did. 🙂
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🙂
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So true, Punam! Brilliantly penned!👌
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Thanks a lot, dear! ❤️
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Oh those happy love stories, the elusive ones that we tick off for the lack of melodramatics.
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Yeah! They are not considered interesting.
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Such gorgeous opening lines………..bodymap of heartbreak❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, my dear! 🤗❤️
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My pleasure 😊
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“Still too deep …” the sadness.
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Yes…when relationships are beyond repair! Thanks for reading, Paul.
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Always a joy
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