Have you ever felt
helplessness and hopelessness
take control of your existence
no, not occasionally,
but every single day of your life
sticky and gooey; covering you from head to toe
seeping into your soul
have you ever been fed
a steady diet of disdain and insults
it tastes so bitter that your tastebuds die
and you can taste bile
topped by a cocktail of abuse and violence
a combination so potent
killing your appetite
that you never realise
you have slept on an empty stomach
have you ever been denied
even a scintilla, a smidgen of hope
to escape the life of drudgery
no chance of flight of freedom
if you have never felt like this
then you have no clue
how the marginalized live or feel
unseen, unheard and totally ignored
to exist on the very periphery of life
is worse than death itself.
This poem has so much voice in it.
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Thank you!
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My pleasure!
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The way you expressed the emotions, used the words just so perfectly!
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Thank you so much, Shivani.
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Profound and insightful words
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Thanks Sadje.
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A pleasure, Punam
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Very powerful.
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Thank you!
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Oops, my bad – sorry Punam 🙂
Check out the tag here 🙂
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No worries, Rory. 🙂
Thanks for the tag. 🙂
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Pleasure 🙂
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This poem resonated with me! I’ve written one with the same title but the focus is on attempted suicide. Based on a family members addiction.
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I am so sorry to know about the suicide attempt. So much damage is caused knowingly as well as unknowingly.
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Yes, the opioid crisis is stealing a generation from us. My niece still struggles out there, some where on the periphery 😢
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Yes, indeed! I am sorry about your niece…it is such a struggle for the family too! Hugs, dear.
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This makes me think about how living as a ghost while alive hurts more than actually being a literal ghost. To know that you are simply looked through is so hurtful because you wish someone would notice you are physically there and silently screaming for love and help. It’s like life around you is going fast, but the life inside of you has taken a complete stop. This poem is so profound, Punam. Beautifully expressed and something I deeply relate to.
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Love how you have looked at this! The analogy of a ghost is so apt. Thank you so much for reading this so beautifully. Have a great day, my dear. ❤️
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You are very welcome, Punam! My pleasure! ☺️💕
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awesome tribute to those with few hopes …
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Thanks Kate.
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am impressed
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🙏🏼❤️
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Lovely. Well done x
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Thanks a lot, Linda.
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❤
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wow this just builds up and up, people who feel like this must indeed be on the periphery of life, and most likely beyond, I cannot help not being sad for them and also feel thankful for my life.
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Thanks ESP!
On a lighter but not non-serious note, I am glad you are becoming wiser. I can pat my back for being a good guru! 😇
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yeah right, what would I be without your 3G: gyan, guidance and gloating.
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😂😂 I have learnt from you that humility has no takers these days! One should blow one’s own trumpet.
3G ka zamaana gaya! Add generosity and garrulity…5G ho jayega! 😎😎
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Wah..so you are learning things like gloating from me and teaching me good things like peripheral life.
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Give and take, Shishya! Teaching is all about learning.
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haha it seems you are learning more
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Always a learner.😊
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😢 Beautiful and raw descriptive of how some suffer. We should all be reminded of it/ Well done Punam ❤️
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Thank you do much, dear Christine! 💞
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This one touched me deeply❤️
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Thanks a lot, my dear! ❤️❤️
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