Our affair started in school at a young age
I was so enamoured that I wanted to keep
you close all the time, never letting you out of sight
you became my mentor, my partner in crime,
the instrument that opened my heart
with you by my side, I became an intrepid warrior
slaying with words those who differed with me
you left your marks on me; blue and black
that was in my opinion a small price to pay
our togetherness was termed messy and undesirable
but the spark that you ignited in me
has made me a poet today
and we stayed together despite the obstacles and criticism
glimpses of our time together
can be found in my prized journal
now age has finally caught up with you
lately things have not been too good between us
I can scarcely decipher our cacography
as I embrace new technology
it is time to lay you to rest, dearest pen
rest in peace my beloved
I have found your replacement in the keyboard!
For the past couple of months I have been taking a break from writing on the weekends. But I promised to write on my pen to someone. This is for you Manessah! It was supposed to be a fun, life changing post inspired by my chat with you. (you must read her hilarious post here). But then I became sentimental. The truth is my pen did change my life! Hope you still enjoy it.
Awww this is the best love story I have read in recent times although poignant ending but then the epic ones are usually melancholic
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Thank you so much, dear Sakshu for your wonderful compliment ! One must love one’s craft and most love stories have sad endings.
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I so agree with you. My pleasure Punam ❤️🤗
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what a beautiful ode to a beloved friend, sometimes we have to put them to rest, they served us well. an ending as beautiful as its beginning!
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Thank you so much, dear Gina. Yes, all good things have to come to an end.
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The pen is mightier than the sword🖋️
… but slower than the keyboard 😎
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It sure is, David. The more we use the keyboard, the slower the pen becomes! Thank you.
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My the Keyboard be with you …
and ever be your trusty lightsaber 🙏
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(‘May’ … not ‘My’)
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I really enjoyed this ode to love and much more after I read the last line 😊
Superb!
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Thank you kindly! Much appreciated. 😊
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Oh you got me!! I was really worried at the battered and bruised. 😳 I was so relieved it was about the pen! This was a wonderful 🙂💕
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I am sorry to have alarmed you, Christine! Thank you so much, my dear. 🙂💞
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Could relate to it … What you write is so intense
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Thank you so much. Means a lot.
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Lovely lines.. Especially the last one beats the record 👏👏
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Thank you so much, Deepu! 🙏🏼❤️
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My pleasure always
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Well penned!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome!
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Lovely.
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Thanks dear.
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Oh I absolutely LOVE this poem, Punam!! I love how you described how things were a bit messy with you two and how it sometimes left you black and blue! Really clever and so true about the ink that flows from the pen! But it’s also a touching story of the humble beginnings of a poet and, of course, with the changing of times you found a nice replacement: something a little less messy, can come wireless or wired, and doesn’t require our fingers to get messy… though they can get a nice little workout from all the typing! Lol. 😄 Love the twist at the end and I am humbled and smiling so hard from this beautiful post, my friend! Thank you for sharing your inspiration with us! 💕
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Aww! Thanks a lot dear. You are spot on about how this relationship evolved and ended! The inspiration came from your post. So if this is beautiful, I share the credit with you. 🤗❤️
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You are too kind, my dear friend! Thank you!! I’m so sorry for responding late to your comment. Life called and I had to answer. Lol. My apologies. I hope you’ve been well, Punam! Enjoy your day when it comes!! 🤗❤️
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You are welcome, dear! Don’t apologise for the delay…life happens! 😀
Thanks and I hope you have a wonderful day too! 🤗❤️
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Aww, a lovely tribute to your pen Punam – I’m not ready to say goodbye to my old faithful yet …
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Thank you so much! No, it is not easy to do so but these days I am using it much lesser than I use the keyboard!
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Oh dear this is so good !!!!!
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Thanks a lot, dear.
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Now that’s what I call a twist. Such a beautiful tribute to the pen, Punam.
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Thank you so much, dear Li. ❤️
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You are very welcome.
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Do you mind if I reblog to Tao-Talk?
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Please, go ahead. It would be an honour. 🙂
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🙂 Thank you
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You are welcome and thank you. 🙂
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Thank you, once again.
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This is just lovely,. You and your pen, in love and together forever. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, my dear. 🙏🏼❤️❤️
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Oh.. But the saddest part is, it doesn’t even know how much we’re in love with it.. So so soulfully done Punam.. Beautiful.. 🙏😇💕
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Love will still be love, dear whether ‘it’ knows or not! Thanks a lot, Debika. ❤️😊💞
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That’s inevitably true.. 😊🙏🏼💕😇
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🙏🏼😀💞🤗
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what a great relationship … love this!
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Thanks, dear Kate. 🙂
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Nice little twist at the end there. Definitely not what I was expecting. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Jay-lyn. 🙂
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You are most welcome. 😊
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The keyboards have indeed taken over, now writing even a line with pen feels like an effort. You made me miss a fountain ink pen I had, named(by its makers) Julie 😍
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I agree! The worst is signing the cheque…I am always worried about the signature match! Wish I could start using the thumb imprint. 😅
Ah, Julie! 😀
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sign me a cheque, we will put it to test 😀
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I knew you would say this! 🤦
Send me your address.
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😀 ok
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Still waiting… the cheque is signed…
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sent mail
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👍🏼
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I can never write directly thru keyboards.I still use a pen to scribble my thoughts and give them a shape before typing them 😄
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Good for you doctor sahiba! 👍🏼😀
I can’t decipher my own handwriting sometimes! 😅😅
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Haha
I guess my doctor script is better than yours😄😄
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I am sure it is! 😂😂
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I love pens and still keep an assortment in various places. It’s my favorite souvenir as well. I don’t think the keyboard could ever fully replace the trusty pen, IMO! You’ve written a spectacular piece here!
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Thanks Irma. I too keep a lot of pens and I do hope the keyboard never ever replaces the pen fully. But I am not using it as much as I used to and I miss fountain pens. 😊
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I do a lot of “writing” on my phone. It’s definitely not the same but more convenient.
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Same here, Irma. Most of my writing is on the phone only because it is so convenient!
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Oh technology! Friend or foe….
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The sadness of moving on 🙂
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I know, it is so difficult but one has to! 🙂
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🙂
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This is too good
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Thank you so much, Muntazir.
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