Messing with my mind
your thoughts would fog my brain
your hold was so strong
that sham of a relationship
which was a creepy failure
held me captive oh so long
when I thought of you
I would tear up inconsolably
believing in your arms I did belong
finally I have put all that behind
you can mess with me no more
am moving ahead with just me along.
Sometimes in life one has to let go and take some hard decisions. Only then can one move on. Well penned Punam!
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You are right, Radhika. Thanks a lot.
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A strong message.
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Thanks dear!
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You’re most welcome 🙏
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Good decision.
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Yes.
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Oh I love this …….. brilliant
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Aww! Thank you so much, my dear. ❤️
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My pleasure 😊
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Exactly how I feel right now.
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I am sorry you had to go through something similar but am glad you have moved on. Thanks for sharing. ❤️
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
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Wonderful and strong Punam 🙂❤️
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Thanks a lot, Christine! 🙂💞
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That sounds like a wise decision, most live their whole lives with fogged minds and wishing the arms would one day hold it all together.
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Wise decision on hindsight…but a difficult one at the moment it was taken. Never good to hold to what is dead.
I am sure right now I am not in conversation with the jealous you. 😀
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Jealous me comes when we discuss light topics, heavier, serious call for shishya me 😄
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Aww! So sweet of you, my dear shishya! ❤️
Honestly, this one is not worth the jealous you. 😀
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This one post you mean 😄
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Yup! This one and only this! 😕
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Relieved, I thought you meant this one as in you
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Haha! 😂😂
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Yep. Moving on. We have to don’t we. Another fantastic write Punam 😊
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We sure have to! Thanks a lot, Lorraine. 😊❤️
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This is such a powerful poem and I love the strength that emanates from this! Definitely something I can identify with, as it’s always disappointing to accept the end of something we thought would last forever. In the end, we move on and see it’s for the best. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Manessah. We cling on in the hope that things will be better but they never are! It is not easy to move on but for our own sanity we must. 🙂
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You are very welcome, Punam! What you say is so true. Sometimes the heart wants what reality is saying we must let go of. A very tough battle to fight. 🙂
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Very tough…I agree! 🙂
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too many hang on well past the expiry date, knowing when to move on is crucial … well penned!
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So it is, Kate. Thanks a lot.
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‘….. am moving ahead with just me along… ‘ how relatable.. 😇💕
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Thanks shona! 🤗😍
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😃😃😍😍😘😘💕
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💞😘🤗
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Waah,powerful👏👏👏
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Thanks a lot, dear! 💞😊
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I can’t stop laughing / as I can relate to this in my own way… and you know best 😃
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Lol I know! 😂
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Brilliant!👏👏
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Thanks a lot, dear! 💞
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