The broken arrows of time pin me to the past
causing a suffocatingly sweet ache
the sweetness which stings and kills me
but the ache that plays with me and keeps me alive
I desperately seek shelter
to lick my purple wounds with a forked tongue
that beguiles with sepia toned future
while spinning multi hued tales of yore
I measure this pain in handfuls
that I bury feverishly in my chest
my coherent thoughts turning shambolic
I look up to the heavens for relief
the king of days, the sun
looks at me with disdain
the prince of nights, the moon
laughs at my predicament
the myrmidon stars look pityingly, as I lie prone
reminding me not to mess with time
so I allow time to mess with me.
So much beauty in this one β€οΈ
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Aww! Thank you, dear G, for your appreciation. π
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interesting use of words and metaphors … does time exist as we perceive it, does it exist at all?
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Ah! Interesting question, Kate. I wish there was a simple answer. But maybe that is the beauty of it…we spend a lifetime, trying to tame time. π
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lol not me, I’m trying to tame my mind … far more challenging and entertaining π
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Taming mind is far more challenging…no doubt… and there are times we are able to do so. But time refuses to stop and listen! π
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lol I doubt time is as we perceive it so I wouldn’t even try π
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I think I just found my new favourite.
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Aww! Satyen, thank you so much for your kind appreciation.
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Absolutely beautiful!β€οΈ
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Thank you so much, dear Richa! π
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Beautiful.. Beautiful.. Specially the last two.. ππ
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Thank you so much always, Debby. π€β€οΈ
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Your opening lines -β The broken arrows of time pin me to the past causing a suffocatingly sweet acheβ
SIGH. I think time is playing with you (and us all); all the time. Magnifico dear Putnam β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Time is playing with us most of the times! The opening lines were playing like a broken record in my mind and I had to pin them down! Thank you so much, dear Rachel. You know how much this means to me. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Truly, an awesome poem, youβre welcome β€οΈπ
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Punam!
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In a universe of chaos
your poetry glimmers
The agony …
and the ecstasy
of a pandoric reality
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Pandoric reality! I might use this in future.
ππΌ Thank you so much, David. This means a lot to me.
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This is gorgeous and has takeaways on various fronts of poetics. The opening sets the tone of brilliance of this post
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Thank you so much, ESP! Much humbled by your words…and you know I mean it.
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How so you write so beautiful – allowing time to mess with me – broken arrow of time pinning you down – you are outstandingβ
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ππΌ Humbled by your words! Thanks a lot, Shantanu.
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My absolute pleasure
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