Vulnerable

That night when we reached a dead end

you were obdurate and I, adamant

I should have walked out then

I did step out, to clear my mind

a purposeless meander turned into a hike

and I came back to fall into your arms

for that is the most natural thing for me

is there now poetic justice that

you have decided not to return

if only I had stuck to my original plan

I could have had the upper hand

but then my heart has always been

more vulnerable than thine.

(Please note this is a work of fiction)

48 thoughts on “Vulnerable

      1. Okay. Now, I know my blurred vison is out of control. Now, I am responding to the the wrong comments. LOL

        Apologies,. I cant’ stop laughing.

        Very sorry for the error. Please, forgive me.
        How embarrassing.

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    1. You are right, some refuse to be ruled by the heart.
      The disclaimer was necessary with this one because a couple of very good and well meaning friends might begin to worry that there is something wrong in my paradise. This is just to assure them that all is well. 😀

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  1. It’s hard to tell who the “winner” is in this one…love the story that unfolded although I would think the heart that is left is the stronger, less vulnerable one than the one that does the leaving.

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  2. i smiled at the disclaimer at the end, to avoid unnecessary questions i suppose, may i borrow this for future? the poem was a story to me, after a walk things do look different, we need time to process, beautifully constructed Punam

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