That night when we reached a dead end
you were obdurate and I, adamant
I should have walked out then
I did step out, to clear my mind
a purposeless meander turned into a hike
and I came back to fall into your arms
for that is the most natural thing for me
is there now poetic justice that
you have decided not to return
if only I had stuck to my original plan
I could have had the upper hand
but then my heart has always been
more vulnerable than thine.
(Please note this is a work of fiction)
Smiling. I really like how you ended this poem.
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I am glad I could make you smile. Thank you so much, Andrew for your time here.
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My pleasure always my pretty Texas Belle.
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Haha! I’ve never been called that!
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Okay. Now, I know my blurred vison is out of control. Now, I am responding to the the wrong comments. LOL
Apologies,. I cant’ stop laughing.
Very sorry for the error. Please, forgive me.
How embarrassing.
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I am glad you are laughing. There is nothing to be embarrassed about. You made my day. LOL
Chill, Andrew and take care.
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Thank you
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This is beautiful, my dear. Beautiful imagery conveying some half regret for something that actually did not leave.
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Thank you kindly, dear. Regrets follow us everywhere.
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Indeed 🙂
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All hearts are vulnerable, some just resist being dictated by the heart. Would you write disclaimers with every poem you write 😀
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You are right, some refuse to be ruled by the heart.
The disclaimer was necessary with this one because a couple of very good and well meaning friends might begin to worry that there is something wrong in my paradise. This is just to assure them that all is well. 😀
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Hahaha what would or wouldn’t the poet do for her beloved prompts
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Lol Bahut papad belne padte hain! 😀
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Brilliant! Loved the word play.
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Thank you so much, dear.
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You’re welcome 😉
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A lovely poem Punam 🙂💕 I’m happy it’s fiction!
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Thank you so much, Christine. All is well. 😊💞
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lol I had guessed this was fictional, but wise to add that disclaimer 🙂
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Thanks dear. I thought so too. 🙂
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haha – it is not a fiction 😜 – but that damn heart ❤️
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Not fiction? 🤔
Lol Thanks Shantanu!
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My pleasure 😊
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Beautiful poem Punam, it had a wonderful lilt and rhyme. Have a wonderful weekend ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Rachel. You too have a wonderful weekend. ❤️❤️
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It’s hard to tell who the “winner” is in this one…love the story that unfolded although I would think the heart that is left is the stronger, less vulnerable one than the one that does the leaving.
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Spoken from the heart, Irma! I too feel running away is cowardice.
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Damn, girl, you’re so good.
Writing is the most natural thing for you.
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Aww! Bo dear, this truly makes my day! I admire your writing so much and for me this is the ULTIMATE!!! ❤️
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And you know I mean it, right?
I don’t give compliments easily.
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I know and that is the reason I treasure it!
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😘
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🤗😘
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Oh this is one of my favorite from you ……loveee it
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Thank you so much, Sakshi! This means a lot. ❤️
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My pleasure 😊
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i smiled at the disclaimer at the end, to avoid unnecessary questions i suppose, may i borrow this for future? the poem was a story to me, after a walk things do look different, we need time to process, beautifully constructed Punam
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Exactly, Gina! Of course, you may! Yes, most times a walk clears the mind…Thanks a lot.
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Wow this is so good! I love the wording that you used! I enjoy your writing so well!:)
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Thank you so much, Stella. I am delighted you enjoy it.:)
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I truly did!:) You are always welcome!
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I won’t believe it is a fiction coz you wrote it so beautifully that it sounds real☺️
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Lol Not my reality, I meant. But it has happened to someone close. Thank you so much, dear. 😊❤️
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so good! Loved it! really well written!
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Thank you so much, Carol. xoxo
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You’re so very welcome thank you 😚💐
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Welcome 😜
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