With my head on your arm
we lay squinting at the sun
as giddy-headed clouds raced against time
we lay there weaving spun-sugar dreams
lacing our fingers as we whispered
our giggles carried on butterfly wingtips
the drunken moon faraway, skipped along its orbit
the rosy future glowed a beauteous shade in our palms
we were young and the times were heady
we forgot to bottle and preserve those sunny times
lugubrious clouds of discontent hang heavy nowadays
their dislike for sunny days so apparent
laying in the park, following butterflies and gathering flowers
seems so frivolous and such a waste of time
haste crushed those spun-sugar dreams
and the moon is always in a rush to avoid stepping on them
may I sleep with my head on your arm tonight
as a homage to those lost carefree days?
Ah! Beautiful beyond words!❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Richa. 💞💞
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Agree, reminds me of fursat ke raat din. Moon is always in a rush to avoid stepping..such lines 💙
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Ah! That’s a lovely song and Gulzar’s lyrics are ultimate! I will take this as high praise, ESP. Thank you so much. 😊❤️
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Poignant and tender poem
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Thanks Sadje. ❤️
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My pleasure 😇
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Agree with Richa I meant. It’s a lovely song, always relatable.
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Thanks. I take back my words in that case. 😂
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Take back the ‘words’ from ‘beautiful beyond words’ ? just beautiful, are we
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Lol no! I thought you were comparing my poem with the song. Beauty is relative, no!
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I know, was being funny 😁 the poem did remind me
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Gosh! I am not going to thank you again!! 😂
Good night.
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😂 good night relative b.
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Good morning 😄
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good morning and have a nice carefree day
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Would love to but can’t… the sun is extremely harsh and the arm is not here! 😅😅
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Ah such beautiful lines… this longing for those carefree days.
The end sentence is very touching and sweet.
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We always seem to yearn for what is no longer there. Thank you so much, Marieke. 🙂
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Oh Punam, your lines got me back to my carefree days.. just beautiful..!! 😇💕
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Thank you so much, dear Debika. I am glad my words could do so. 🤗❤️
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Not to thank dearie, it’s always a pleasure.. 😇💕
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🤗💞
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oh when the reality of life sets in it’s always good to reflect on those carefree days 🙂
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Yes, escapism! 😉
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Such a lovely desire – I so loved it
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Thank you kindly, Shantanu. 😊
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My absolute pleasure
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I love the contrast you create between the frivolity and joy of those heady and magical days (love your lines about the moon, you really are magnificent with these), and the haste and heaviness that life creates around us. Oh to sit as you describe and relive those carefree days.
Beautiful, wonderful, brilliant. As always 💜❤️
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Ah yes, to relive those days…. I feel, at times we take life too seriously. Thank you so very much, Rachel. ❤️❤️
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Lovely and so sweet 🙂💕
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Thank you so much, Christine. 🙂💞
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Gorgeously beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you kindly, Yasmin. 💞💞
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So beautiful
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Thanks Sakshu! ❤️
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Always a pleasure Punam ❤️
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I feel like I need to leave this on my hubby’s pillow! Wonderfully written!
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Don’t we need to leave reminders from time to time! Thank you, Irma. ❤️
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Yes! You’re most welcome dear friend!
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Yes I miss those carefree days !! Of course I can lend you my arms but … NO that’s not your place 🤷♀️
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Lol! No, you keep your arm for that special person! Thanks a lot. 😂😂
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