I look at my skinned knees
raw from crawling over
the jagged edges of reality
retrieving broken dreams
does no one any good
the salt from my eyes stings them
but they continue to lie prone
so I lay them away
from the escarpment
I won’t be surprised if
they fall off the precipice again
to be shattered and
scattered all over
and I reconcile myself
to the inevitability of stark truths
but if even one does
manage to resurrect itself
it will be a reason to revel
for dreams keep us alive.
Beautiful! I love this! ❤
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Thank you so much! ❤️
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💜😄
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Just beautiful.
Can’t agree more.
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Thanks, my dear.
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Wow.. Beautiful beyond words!❤️
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Thank you so much, Richa. ❤️
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome 😊
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So touching Punam my dear, dreams can seem so far away, unrealistic, and impossible….but in the same breath, they inspire us, motivate, and can beautiful journey. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Sending lots of love and hugs my dear! 🙂
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What would we be without our dreams, isn’t it! Thank you so much, my dear for your love and hugs. ❤️❤️🤗
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🤗💗💖
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Dreams are a different place, sometimes where we yearn to be, others not so. A thought-provoking piece indeed.
My FOWC story
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Thank you kindly for stopping by.
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lovely analogy, dreams do keep us going 🙂
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They do. Thanks dear. 🙂
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always welcome 🙂
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Oh my god / that’s so good and your “ words”
❤️ all hearts !!
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Aww! ❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗
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Profound, like most contradictions are. Love the way this starts and finishes
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Thank you kindly, ESP. This means a lot.
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Brilliant is the word for this❤️
I loved the way you expressed it.
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Thank you so much, Yasmin for your kind words. ❤️❤️
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What a beautiful resurrection – ❤️
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Thank you so much, Shantanu. ❤️
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My absolute pleasure
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Gorgeous ❤️
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Thanks dear! 🤗❤️
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Most welcome
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I love the image of skinned knees and jagged reality and then the hopeful ending! You really have a knack for painting a bleak picture then letting in that ray of sunshine at the end!
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I can’t help it…I am an inveterate optimist!
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Your last line says it all. Wonderful poem, Punam.
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Thanks a lot Li. ❤️
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You are welcome, Punam 🙂
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