The secret pockets
I had filled with cherished memories
the sum total of priceless moments
still hold my precious treasure
that salty kiss as we watched the sun come up
the movie stub when we first held hands
the single rose that you gave me the first time
I sit under the star flecked sky and
feeling the salt on my lips
let these memories embrace me warmly
(keeping the rest undisturbed for another time)
they cannot double up for you
but are a good enough substitute.
When we miss someone so much, those substitutes are most important. The image of you enjoying a few while keeping the others undisturbed, is so beautiful, Punam. ❤
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Yes Inky, sometimes the absence becomes a bit too much to bear but one has to find ways to go on. Thank you so much for your kind words. 🙂❤️
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Only one in your shoes can truly understand… you are kindly welcome, Punam 🙂 ❤
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Yes, of course. 🙂❤️
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Wow, so beautiful how you describe those memories.. they must be very valuable to you.
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Thank you so much, Marieke. So they are. ❤️
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You’re welcome ❤️
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Wonderful. Loved the ending.
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Thanks dear!
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What a romantic and beautiful image you describe here Punam, and so filled with longing. These treasures we can hold that transport us into the arms of someone we miss so dearly… gorgeous, and heartbreaking. The weeks must be feeling very long at the moment ❤️❤️
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Ah yes! Some days, some weeks seem so much longer…thank you so much for understanding that, Rachel. ❤️❤️
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I hope the next few weeks go quickly then my friend ❤️❤️
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How sweet of you to say that! Amen. ❤️❤️
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Tender poetry
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Thank you so much, Sadje.
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You’re welcome 😊
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Poignant, yet heartwarming.
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Thank you so much, Heather. ❤️
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My pleasure.
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heartfelt … no idea how you cope, you are so strong!
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Thank you, dear Kate. ❤️
I am strong 💪🏼 lol
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Oh Punam, precious memories are indeed our personal treasures forever xxx
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So they are, Ivor. ❤️ Thank you so much.
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You made me nostalgic – living those moments again through your gorgeous poem – loved it my dear friend ❤️
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Aww! Thank you so much, Shantanu. ❤️
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My absolute pleasure 🌸❤️
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Oh that is so sweet 💕 I loved your memories
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Thank you so much, my dear. 🙂💞
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oh ..how those parentheses creep in. the salty kiss, movie stub, first rose..your lovely memories gives the vicarious pleasure 🙂
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That’s what written words should do…give vicarious pleasure. Thanks a lot ESP. 🙂
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Yeah without these poems life would be like a series of meaningless events.
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Nah, not that bleak! Don’t discount FB, Insta, Twitter and the like… 😀😀
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😂😂 each platform with their gurus, of survival.
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Indeed! 😀😀
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Absolutely wonderful!❤️
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Thank you so much, Richa. 💞
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Very romantic / words and feelings so well held together ❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear! ❤️
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