Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that engages with another art form – it might be about a friend of yours who paints or sculpts, your high school struggles with learning to play the French horn, or a wonderful painting, film, or piece of music you’ve experienced – anything is in bounds here, so long as it uses the poem to express something about another form of art.
(This poem is a tribute to a dear friend who is not only a singer, musician, songwriter but also a poet of repute.)
Music
I shiver as the opening bars
caress my soul
raising goosebumps
right up to my heart
which forgets to beat
then the deep mellow voice
fills every corner of its being
making it beat again
in tandem with the
haunting sound of the fiddle
my sorrows, worries, cares melt away
as the song achingly sung about lost love
consumes me with its tenderness
transporting me
to hitherto unknown spaces
of wide green expanses and
snow covered peaks
there is rainfall in my heart
I open my damp eyes with a start
when the music stops
my drab life beckons again.
Beautifully written
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Thank you so much Sadje. 🙂
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You’re welcome 😉
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this calls for an encore, written from experience and with much emotion
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Thank you so very much, ESP! Music has to be felt and he is an accomplished musician.
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You are lucky to have a musician friend 👍
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Indeed, very lucky! 😊
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Speaks my language – I actually feel music.
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Ah, Paul! I totally agree. Thank you so much.
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Isn’t it so good?
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It sure is. 🙂
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This is brilliantly written! Beautiful!❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Richa. 💞
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Niiiiiiice!!!
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Thanks Kunal.
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Great ink
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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❤️❤️
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❤️
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So very beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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A pleasure!
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Music lifts the heart and soul, IMO. Love this piece and superb free verse.
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Thank you kindly, Eugenia. Much appreciated.
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This is excellent Jim!
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I just wrote a poem to enter your challenge.
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I just read it and commented on it, Jim. It truly encapsulates your love for music.
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You presented the exact feel so aptly.. could feel it, as it exactly happens when we are lost in our best numbers.. thanks for making me reach there.. 😇👌🏼👌🏼💕
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Your comment makes me so happy dear! Thanks a lot! 🤗💞
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😘💕🤗
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Such is the power of music – it heals
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Yes, of course! Thank you kindly .
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My absolute pleasure
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Oh Punam. You transported me into this song and made my heart beat along to the rhythm of these beautiful words. Can’t say enough how much I love this, so moving, it’s like a piece of music in itself ❤️💛
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I am so happy this spoke to you thus. You are a musician yourself, so you know how a piece of music affects the listener. Thank you, my dear. Your words mean a lot. 🤗❤️
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😊❤️
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You perfectly created the atmosphere a powerful song/singer can create as they weave their magic … you are both equally talented! You transported me there Punam ❤
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Thank you so much Kate. This means a lot to me. ❤️
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you are always welcome Punam ❤
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❤️
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Wow, love this! My beloved is a musician so this really speaks to me 🙂
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Awww! That is wonderful! I hope I have been able to capture it correctly. Thank you so very much, Marieke. 😊❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam 🙂 ❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you!
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Always my pleasure!
xoxoxo
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Music takes us away and how lucky that musician is to have such an attentive ear. A most beautiful piece, Punam.
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Thank you so much, Inky. I am blessed and lucky to have such a friend. ❤️
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You’re kindly welcome, Punam ❤
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Your beautiful words reflect what a great talent your friend is and he is equally blessed to have a friend like you who could connect so deeply with that music ❤❤❤
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Yes, Yasmin. I am blessed that he shares his music with me. Thank you so much, my dear. 💞💞
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this is great, thanks for sharing.
if you have a chance, please check out the music/art blog.
http://thehighsnlows.com
Thank you,
Lorraine
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