Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that starts from a regional phrase, particularly one to describe a weather phenomenon.
Summertime
‘Tis hot enough to scald a lizard
not a speck of cloud in the sky
nor the slightest breeze
the unrelenting gaze of Sol Invictus
bakes earth to cookie firmness
fine cracks on earth
running like a network of broken veins
dry river beds exposing their filthy belly
trees emaciated and shrunken
leaves wilted and drooping with exhaustion
sweat evaporating in seconds
leaving the skin papery and parched
thirst remaining unquenchable
and the slow whirring fan
offering no solace at all
summers are usually like this every year.
This is a sweltering poem, nicely done.
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The heat here can be debilitating. Thanks a lot, Jim.
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Brilliantly done as always!👏👏
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Thank you Richa. I am humbled. 🙏
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i am enjoying reading your takes on the daily challenges, creative, informative and lots of fun…for you and me!
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Aww! Thanks a lot, Gina dear!
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Summertime, a lovely poem Punam.
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Thank you so much, Hélène!
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My pleasure.
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Figuratively fantastic, Punam. This is spot on for the summer we endure one weekend in late July 🙂
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You are lucky it is just a weekend! Thank you so much.
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🙂 You are kindly welcome.
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Fabulous imagery! 🙂💕
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Thank you kindly. 😊💞
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you really captured the scalding scorching sweat of summer .. very well written Punam 🙂
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sounds oppressive 😦
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Summers are oppressive here!😓
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Sounds like winters here. Temperature extremes you can’t get away from…
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I know…it has become global phenomena!
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Papery, really evokes the feeling of parched.
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Thank you Paul. The heat can be unforgiving.
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Yes, something to endure.
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Your imagery here is fantastic! I don’t like hard cookies but I do love your line about the earth being baked to cookie firmness. 😍🍪
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Aww! Thanks Irma.❤️
It is already hot now and the heat does not relent till September.😓
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Irma, my comments on your poems are not showing up! 😥
Could you please check your spam folder.
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Oh no! WP has been crashing on me so often it’s been difficult to comment. Where is the spam folder? I don’t see it in the reader. Plus you have already been approved – you are so NOT spam!!
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When you visit ‘my site’ check ‘view admin’. Click on spam and you will find comments there. Most are actually spam. Then you approve the comments you want to retrieve. They will go into ‘pending’. Click again and they will show up where they belong.
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Oh my! You were so right! I had to log on to a computer to find the spam folder. I just saw all your comments.
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Good you found them! Still awake?
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Yes! It’s the first time I’ve had a quiet moment since my kids have been on spring break this week. =)
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Great. When my kids were younger I used to wait for them to go to sleep to catch up with my reading!
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Yes, although now it is 4:30 AM here and I haven’t slept…oh well, sometimes my brain needs words for nourishment instead of sleep.
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How true Irma! There have been nights when I have not slept and words have kept me company.
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