That sinking feeling
of being abandoned
of not being on the radar
of the one who matters
emotions at the lowest ebb
thoughts incoherent
and then
total oblivion.
That sinking feeling
of being abandoned
of not being on the radar
of the one who matters
emotions at the lowest ebb
thoughts incoherent
and then
total oblivion.
Painful.. touching
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Thank you kindly. ❤️
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You have captured this feeling so perfectly. That feeling that is oh so painful when we go unnoticed by someone we love.
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Thank you so much. Yes, it is and makes one feel so worthless and insignificant.
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It does…. And it is an easy feeling to drown in without seeing any life rafts offered to you. Great poem ❤️
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Ah! I love that you mentioned life raft to go with the flow of the poem. Thanks once again. 🤗❤️
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Heartfelt!❤️
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Thank you, Richa. 💞
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Oh.. hugs dear.. heartwrenching one.. rulaygi kya..?? ☹️😔
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Na, re! Hugs back to you! ❤️❤️
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🤗💕
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Maine toh ro hi diya😢
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Hota hai, kabhi-kabhi. Hugs dear.
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🤗
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I feel this one.
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Aww Paula! ❤️
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I like all the water themed words you used here -it feels like drowning into nothingness.
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Thank you Irma. Radar evoked the image of a ship and thus the water themed words.
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❤️
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Love how you’ve captured the emotion.
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Thank you.
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the sad feeling so well expressed
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Thanks Shantanu!
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My pleasure always
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deeply sad, like you’re being submerged …
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Exactly!
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That oblivion sounds despairing, a horrible place to be, a powerful description.
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It sure is horrible, Paul. Thanks for reading.
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That came from the depth of your soul.
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It did.
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Not being on the radar. Well said.
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Happens, isn’t it! Thank you so much.
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Ah, many are like this, sipping life and watching it pass by. Some of us want life to be this way. You write this with ease, my friend. Excellent.
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Yes, so it is. Thank you so very much, my dear.
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You are kindly welcome, dear.
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