She was finely built
and moved with a regal bearing
swiftly and silently
gliding through the water
I often stood on the bridge
savouring the sea spray on my face
tasting the saltiness on my tongue
inhaling the warm sea breeze
as it whipped my hair across my face
feeling alive like never before
now as I read your mail about your voyage
I realise how much I am missing it all
and most of all being with you.
Perfect.
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Thank you. ๐
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Youโre welcome ๐
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Beautiful, my dear!
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Thank you kindly, dear G! โค๏ธ
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You are so welcome!
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Gorgeous
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Aww! Thank you so much. โค๏ธ
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That was a quick comment for a truly beautiful poem. I was transported ๐
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Thank you once again, my dear.
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Fine words ๐ really nostalgic ๐
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Thank you kindly! ๐โค๏ธ
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This is what it is like to love. A beautiful description of how it is to share that space with the one you love. Sending hugs and war thoughts today as you miss him โค
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Aww! Thank you so much for your hugs warm thoughts and lovely words. I am touched. ๐โค๏ธ
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๐ You are welcome, Punam… always ๐ โค
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This is very lovely. Love is beautiful
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It is indeed. Thank you so much. ๐
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Brings back so many memories!! ๐ Well done!
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Aww! I am glad it could. Thank you so much! ๐โค๏ธ
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Brilliant! Love it!โค๏ธ
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Thanks a lot, Richa. ๐
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That longing ache
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It really hurts. Thanks for reading.
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Yes – and my pleasure Punam
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gifted writing and know you miss him … didn’t realise that you had sailed too?
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Thanks Kate. Yes, Kate…for many years.
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wow so you really do have a lot in common ๐
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So sweet and beautiful Punam!๐ ๐ค ๐
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Thanks a lot, dear. ๐ค๐
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You’re very welcome my dear.๐๐ค๐
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Loveโค
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OMG – this is beyond beautiful- much love to you – such a charming read โค๏ธ
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Aww! Thank you so much dear friend. I am really touched. โค๏ธ
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You write beautiful
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๐ Thank you once again.
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My pleasure
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