She stood there alone
waif like in a corner
seemingly overwhelmed
by the gathering
he watched her from
the corner of his eye
overcome by a wave of empathy
he knew what it meant
to be isolated in a crowd
he weaved his way towards her
the moment their eyes met
there was instant chemistry
acutely aware of each other
they were soon talking as if
they had known each other forever
a spark was ignited,
passion awakened,
temperatures soared
only time would tell
whether it would last.
This is lovely! ❤
I know what its like to be isolated from a crowd. A terrible feeling.
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Aww! Thank you dear! ❤️
But I am sorry it resonates with you.
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Oh, don’t be! Its a past thing 🙂 Stronger now ❤
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Wonderful! The Aieshi I have come to know through her writing is strong and with a mind of her own. 🤗💞
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That is so sweet ❤
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Beautiful!❤️
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Thanks, dear! 💞
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Aw, such a beautiful chemical bonding of words to describe that feeling of knowing you’ve found an instant connection. Love it, Punam.
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Ah! Such a lovely comment! Thank you from the bottom of my heart. ❤️
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You are kindly welcome, Punam. Not sure that heart has a bottom 🙂 ❤
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Hmmm! 🤔 Okay… then the depth of my heart! ❤️
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Much better 🙂 ❤
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Thank you kindly, sir! 😊❤️
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De rien, madame 🙂 ❤
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Waif like in a corner…. I love this! The whole poem is so romantic.
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I am delighted you think so. Thank you, dear. ❤️
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❤️
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Some instant bonds last for a lifetime
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Yes, so true! Thank you so much, Sakshi. ❤️
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My pleasure 😊❤️
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It would dear.. it would.. it’s so known to me.. honi ki koi nahi taal sakta.. as because of the instant chemistry, the spark was ignited.. at such times, Time surrenders.. one of your best ones till date, Punam.. 👍🏼😊😇👌🏼💕
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Aww! So very kind of you to say that, dear Debika! 🙏❤️ Yes, at such times, time does surrender. 💞😊
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😘💕😇
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Honi *ki …. 😜😄
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Omg.. not again.. honi *ko …. 🤦😜
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😂😂
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😳🤔
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Sometimes it takes years to know someone and sometimes it just take a moment –
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So true, Shantanu! Thank you so much for your read.
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My absolute pleasure
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so sweet, the start of something good, we hope!
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Thank you Kate. Hope so too!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you!
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That was love at first thought❤👌
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Ah! Yes, of course ! Thank you so much, dear. 😊💞
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