I fold and tuck your love
in between my heartbeats
keeping it safe from prying eyes
it courses through my veins
a pulsating sweet ache
the words you leave by my pillow
whisper intoxicating secrets
this love makes me so complete
but I can’t go tomtoming around
the town
I am a bit old-fashioned, you see
its just between you and me
and I like to keep it that way.
I love this ❤
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Aww! Thank you so much, Aieshi! 💞
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Gorgeous rendition of love – no Tomtomming around, brilliant 💛.
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Thank you so, so much! I am glad you think so. 💙
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Adorable ❤️😍
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Thanks a lot, dear Sakshu! 🤗💞
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My pleasure
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Last three lines so work for me!
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I am so glad they do! Thank you so much.
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Another old-fashioned gal here. Lovely.
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Ah! Glad to meet you. Thank you so much.
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A pleasure.
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Great poem.
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Thank you so much.
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My pleasure 😇
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sweet ❤
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Exquisitely sweet my friend xx
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Thank you so much, Ivor. 💙
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Oh this is so beautiful Punam. I love, love, love your words 💕💕💕
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Thank you so much, dear Christine! 💞💞 Please accept my apologies for the delay in reply. Your comment landed in the spam! 🙄
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No worries Punam…it happens 🙂💕
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💞
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That first line!
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Ah! Thank you, Paul.
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You are very welcome Punam
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This, I truly relate to. I know many love to announce their love through loud speakers but for me, love is sacred and should be protected at all costs. Excellent, Punam.
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I guess we think alike. 😊 Thank you so much, Inky.
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My pleasure, Punam. 🙂
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O my my..!!! ….👏🏼😊👒👌🏼👍🏼😘💞😇
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😊🤗💞😘
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you kindly.
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You are so very welcome!! I always love to share great posts with followers!!!
xoxoxo
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Oh how i love this kind of love too.💓💓💛
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Aww! Thank you, dear.
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This is real love💖
Love shouldn’t be advertised ☺
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I am so so sorry Yasmin. I missed your beautiful comment. Thank you so much, my dear. 🤗💞
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My absolute pleasure, Punam❤
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If this is love, I love the old fashioned way
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Ah! So many of us think alike. 😊
Thank you so much, Shantanu.
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True that. My pleasure
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old fashioned is fine, but love of this flavor may go unnoticed, use a love emoji, at the least 🙂
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Lol! I’ll keep that in mind. 😀
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One emoji at a time..two or more would mean you are flirting
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I wish there was an emoji of fluttering eyelashes…though I am sure there must be gif somewhere! 😂😂
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Hahaha.. that goes well with you?
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Lol, no!
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Ah ..sucks just when I was trying to picturise
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Go ahead…give a free rein to your imagination… my words should not be an impediment… 😂😂
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Now ..the above comment would go well with fluttering lashes, ‘😂 ‘ kills all the remnants of imagination
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I never knew my words would have opposite effect!! Lol
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All I see is poems and laughter, and then a visionary appears putting the prompts at their rightful place
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I am glad you see laughter. It is so important for me to laugh, more so at myself. More than a visionary, you make me sound like a strict teacher (which incidentally I was) putting the prompts in their rightful place! 😅😅
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can’t stop laughing..can’t see you as a strict teacher either 😀
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Ohhh! You should ask my ex-students… they have such stories of terror to tell 😀
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Maybe you have changed, all the poetry smoothing the strict teacher projections you might have had, I have a contrary view .but you know that 💙 murga banaya? 😀
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Na re! I haven’t changed. In the classroom I didn’t tolerate indiscipline. Murga kabhi nahi banaya …zaroorat hi nahi padhi! 😂😂
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Whoa khadoos!! Noway..lol
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You know what? This landed in spam!!
No, not khadoos…more like no-nonsense type. 😀
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