She lay in the cloistered, dingy room
Tired, pale and listless
A hacking cough racked her body
Leaving her breathless
She could feel her end drawing near
But was not ready to depart yet
She wanted to see her daughter one last time
She needed time till next sunset
But the god of death Yama* on his buffalo
With his pet hounds in tow
Stood at the foot of her bed
Beckoning her to go
Her eyes pleaded with him
Begging for a show of mercy
This was not a unique request
So he shook his head tersely
As tears of helplessness slid from her eyes
His soft heart was moved by her plight
“Just one more day, old lady,
I’ll be back tomorrow night!”
This happens often in life, a dying person holding on until they can see a loved one, one last time.
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Yes, I have seen this longing to live and it is heartbreaking. Thank you Andrew for your time and your read.
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Oh, such beauty in those lines.. it touched.. πππΌππΌ
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Thank you my dear for your kind words. π€π
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A wonderful, emotion-provoking narrative!! π
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Have witnessed something similar.This was beautifully written, Punam. I did enjoy that death was patient enough to allow one more day.
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We have lots of myths and stories here which depict Yama as a considerate one, agreeing to come later.
Thank you so much.
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Yama is new to me. Thanks for the introduction and you are welcome.
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We have 33 million minor and major gods and goddesses in the Hindu pantheon and I know about just a handful!!π
Happy to share whatever little I know. π
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Yes, no shortage of entities to write about π
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You can certainly weave good tory Punam! Well done ππ
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Thank you so much Christine. ππ
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yes very well written, Yama the lord of death as a kind one … very different take to my shirley temple π
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Thanks Kate. Yes, different because I was responding to the prompts. π
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lol you are the Prompt Queen, a clever bean π
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Prompt queen! Lol
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have to call you PQ for short π
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Lol π
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Sensitively expressed.
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Thank you!β€οΈ
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Raw and certainly very moving Punam, tears at the heart
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Thank you kindly Paul.
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You are very welcome Punam π
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Prompt queen πΈ
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πππ Yasmin, tum bhi!!
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Such a touching message that death can be merciful and have empathy. Lovely poem.
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Yes, we always look at death with fear. It can be merciful too.
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
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You are very welcome π
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