Like a river in spate
Feelings in a flux
Helter skelter emotions
Running amok
Love instrumental
In causing an ache
Splinter in the heart
Keeping me awake.
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Love can be so wonderful and difficult at the same time! Great use of all the prompts!
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So true! Thank you so much.
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You are welcome.
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Yes, love can cause that ache especially when the one you love has to go for periods of a time and that time is near. It does keep us awake. Excellent, Punam.
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Aww! Am I that transparent? Thanks for understanding, Inky. 🙂
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You write it so well. You are welcome 🙂
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Thank you so much for your generous compliment. Sorry for the delay in replying. My phone was giving problems.
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You are kindly welcome. Gotta love technology 🙂
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Oh yeah!🙂
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A good poem.
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome
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powerful use of prompts in a cute love sick poem 🙂
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I didn’t realise it while writing that it would come across as love sick 😉 Thank you so much. 🙂
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lol that was only my interpretation, I’m sure others would have read it differently 🙂
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I am sure everyone interprets differently…that’s the beauty of WP!!🙂
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exactly 🙂
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I see your rhymes now! These are all great reasons be to awake…although I think you forgot to include scrolling on your phone reading blogs as a reason…😁
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Ah, good you can see the rhymes! 😀
Actually I am awake mainly because I am sadly lagging behind in my reading of blogs! 😅😅
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Lol! You and me both! People just have to stop writing such good stuff so often! 😂
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Oh, they sure should!😂😂
Life would be easier. I am always two steps behind in spite of my best efforts. 😅😅
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This brings out the hopeless romantic in all of us…and that line “splinter in the heart” evokes a lot of emotions and my oh my it made me so emotional..
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Awww! We all are hopeless, isn’t it! Take care, my dear…don’t get too emotional. ❤️
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