Yesterday Jim who writes as newepicauthor asked me, “If a bird and fish were to fall in love, could you write a poem about them?“
So Jim, here’s one for you.
The long flight had been very tiring
The heron was feeling pretty peckish
The sight of the beautiful garden pond
Brought forth visions of mouth watering fish
It had sighted this pond the previous day
Devouring all that was on offer, its ambition and wish
Majestically it stood in the water
Eyeing all the swimming food, delish
As it waited patiently for a prey to come close
Who do you think swam up to him; a goldfish!
One look and the heron was mesmerised
Forgetting its raging appetite hellish
Watching in fascination and adoration
At the ebullient and fiesty goldfish
The goldfish shimmied close to the herons legs
Giving it a shy smile and looking coquettish
And thus began the unlikely love story
Of the grey heron and his sweet little fish!
Wonderfully written.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure
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That is so beautiful, I am amazed.
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Ah! I am glad you think so. Thank you so much.
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What an idea to think about and write on.. bird an fish in love..!! And you did it so beautifully.. 😇👌🏼👌🏼
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Thank you so much, Debika. I am happy you liked it. 😊💞
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What a brilliant take
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Thank you so much Shantanu for your appreciation .
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My absolute pleasure
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🙏
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oh well done, you are a romantic and a master 🙂
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Thank you so much Kate. You are too kind…I am a realist and a pupil but my poems are sometimes flights of fancy and fantasy! 😀😉
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and that’s what makes them magical 🙂
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🙏😊
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Ah, challenge nailed and all while using the prompts. Excellent, Punam.
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Thank you, Inky. I thought I might as well give it a try. 😊
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You are kindly welcome, Punam 🙂
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❤ sweet tale of romance.
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Thank you so much, Li.
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With our pens we create worlds, why not this one?
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Oh yes! Why not, indeed! ❤️
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Inter species love poem! Your talent abounds!!
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Haha! Irma, trying to stretch imagination way beyond permissible limits! 😅😅
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Aaww, this was sweet!
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Thank you so much, Irene. I am glad you liked it.
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This love story of yours inspired me to write about another unlikely love pairing! https://iidorun.wordpress.com/2019/01/14/549-18-a-short-story/
Love has no boundaries!
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Love truly has no boundaries and I love your take. ❤️
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Awww so sweet!😁🤗💞
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Thank you so much! 😀🤗❤️
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You’re so welcome! Kin of reminds me of a cute children’s poem.😊 🤗❤️
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😀🤗
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