It had started as a play
She wanted to see how far she could go
One gash on the index finger
Tiny beads of blood stood out
She watched fascinated
A gash on the forearm
And blood spurted out
There was slight discomfort
But the eruption excited her
Filling her with strange elation
She continued carving motifs on her skin
Feeling weak but intoxicated
Fresh blood had this effect on her
Finally she slumped on the floor
Knife still in her hand
They found her putrescent body
A week later
For she lived alone
No family, nor any friendship
Mourned by none.
I don’t think I should encourage you, Punam. 🙂 Just joking. Well done.
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No fears Tracy. 😀 Just flight of imagination. Prompts lead to creativity. Thank you! 🙂
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🙂
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Oh. Well I certainly wasn’t expecting this from you.
Are you… are you feeling okay?
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I am perfectly fine Matt. Thanks for your concern. Not about me. Somehow the prompts took me on a gory path.
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Yeah, that’s what I don’t expect from you 😱
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I am sorry if it alarmed you. If at all you see my words taking this direction, rest assured it is a piece of fiction. 🙂
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It’s good though ☺
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Thank you so much. 😊
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A one act play… tragedy befitting Shakespeare’s pen. How well you have captured the sinking and empty feeling of being alone.
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Aw shucks! You are too kind. Thank you so much, Inky.
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Just being honest … you are welcome, Punam.
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🙏❤️
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🙂 ❤
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well, mourned by no-one. ouch! thats a horrible life. we should create a cat for her. Or maybe (at least) a bird :))?
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You want me to do that? 😲
I could try and do that . 🤔
Gimme a few moments. 😎
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Sorry I’m late. It’s amazing how quick u r to respond by – “poem”. Applause!
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Thank you, thank you! No worries about being late. 😊
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How about this…👇👇
For she lived alone
No family, nor any friendship
Except for her pet canary
Which had stopped singing
Thus mourned by none but one.
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Poor bird. I don’t know it’s even more “sad” than the previous one…u r the master of “sad lyrics” 😄🙀
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😬😬 I know, it became sadder!
‘Master of sad lyrics’!! I will now have to write a funny one! 🙄😂
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powerfully penned Punam sadly too many live such wasteful lives but the self-harm is usually drawn out much longer and painfully slower than this 😦
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It is very sad Kate. Yes, self-harm is long drawn but sometimes it can be fatal.
Thanks for reading.
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it most certainly can be fatal but more usually after years of cutting 😦
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Indeed.
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A very sad tale.
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Yes, indeed. Thank you for reading.
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Poignant and so well expressed.
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Thank you so much Andrew. It is sad when precious lives are wasted this way.
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Scary and sad, a well written tragedy!😊❤️
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Yes, very scary Jenna. Thanks for reading. 💕
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🤗❤️
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Such fetishes actually exist, sweet tragedy.
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Sadly they do. Thanks for reading Paul.
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Pleasure
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If you work in mental health care, you are completely gripped by a story like this. The good news is that rarely does a cutter go far enough to take her own life, but then I don’t think that was your character’s intent. Or was it? Can’t ask er, can we.
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No, we can’t. Most times they don’t realise how far they have taken it. Thanks for reading.
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“It had started as a play
She wanted to see how far she could go”. Like Robert Frost wrote, “and knowing how way leads on to way….” Such a sad tale 😦
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Living on the brink can lead to tragedy. Such a lovely quote by Frost. Thanks for reading Li.
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The gory artistry was scary yet an tinge of rawness so beautifully expresses
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I know it became gory. Thank you kindly.
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*expressed
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Whoah whoah WHOAH, I was NOT expecting that ending. I had this view of a more troubled youth, a teenager perhaps, but I had taken the “alone” in a figurative way not… literally.
Wow. This was actually very accurate. Wow.
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Ah! Wow from you is a big WOW for me. Thank you so much!!
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I seriously was dumbfounded by it XD
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🙏
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This is so sad. But so amazing! Unfortunately too relatable.
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Yes, it is sad and I am so sorry it is relatable. I wish it weren’t.
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