I did try it once
It was raining that day
And my love was new
Love and rains are
A heady combination
Pirouetting on air
I fell flat on my face!
Since then I prefer
To keep my feet
Firmly grounded
Letting my mind do
A whirling jig
Though I must admit
That too is not advisable
Leaves one dizzy and ditzy
As well as nauseous!
Dancing on air
Floating like a cloud
That feeling of euphoria
These days whenever
I feel these coming
I batten the hatches
And let the feeling pass.
Feet firmly planted
On dependable
Terra firma
I prefer a slow waltz
With my lover’s arm around my waist!
Day 10: Dancing on air
Dances are best when they are physically shared and, surely, are safest with both feet planted firmly on the ground. Beautifully and wisely penned.
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Yes, definitely. Well, after madness, wisdom does return. Thank you so much for noticing the shift. š
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Oh, of course, after the madness š Some shifts are noticeable. You are most welcome š
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Indeed! š
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punam, simply wonderful. i will comment on each of your post next week. busy with navarathri.. just coming back to post the #OctPoWriMO
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Thanks Deepa. You enjoy the navrathri. These will still be lying in your reader when you come back. š¤
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Lovely Punam! šš
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Thank you dear. ā¤ļø
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Loved this! Wonderful!ā¤
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Thank you so much Richa. š
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Euphoria is right: I love the brief lines and the overall feeling of being elated that runs all the way through. Quite lovely!
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Thank you for reading and your comment.
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Mmmm yes when we consider the option of a close intimate dance with our love, a beautiful flowing momentum…that’s definitely the best option. šā¤ļø
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Ah, isn’t it! Thank you so much Jenna. šš
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You’re welcome Punam. š š Have a wonderful day!ā¤ļø
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You too! š
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Thank you!š
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so sweet and romantic š
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Thank you so much dear. š
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