When I reread what I had written
Dear daughter, I wish, my tongue I had bitten.
For no mother should ever say such things,
This world may be bad but I am a fixer of such things.
So go out, my dear, reach for the stars
I’ll see that on your freedom there are no bars.
And if in the process you scrape your knees
I’ll be there to kiss it better, you see.
Go out and stay as late as you want
You have same rights that to your brother I grant.
Wear what you wish, I won’t object
For even covered head to toe, to lecherous stares you are subject.
I know how harrowing it can be
When they treat you like an object to touch and feel,
But always remember my words wrought in steel.
They can touch your body and inflict pain untold
They can never wreak your spirit or defile your soul.
This body is of no consequence, keep your spirit intact
You are a born winner and that is a fact.
Discover, explore, invent and innovate
Just one life and so much to taste
Failure or success, whatever you meet
Your goal is to march to your own beat.
Go my precious one, have a heartbreak or two
For what breaks us, makes us stronger too.
And when it becomes too much to bear
To embrace you in a hug, I am always there.
Never we as parents will an impediment be
Go tilt at as many windmills that you can see.
Falling, getting up, dusting your clothes
And starting all over again
Go save the world and I’ll never say never again.
We all have but one life, make the most of it
This world is bad no doubt, go seek the best in it.
Keep your soul intact, always full of love and compassion
Never bite your tongue, your feelings must always find expression.
There are good people, sweetheart, all around you
Seek their company and they will let you be you.
And when you touch the pinnacle of your life
Your mom will be cheering, raising a toast to your life.
Very nice Punam. Loved it. Particularly: “Go save the world and I’ll never say never again. We all have but one life, make the most of it, This world is bad no doubt, go seek the best in it. Keep your soul intact, always full of love and compassion”
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Sorry Sujit missed your comment.
Daughters may seem fragile but are actually so strong.
Thank you so much.
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Punam …..both the posts on daughter are so real and seem like something wrenched from within us.
I love the second one more 🙂
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Thank you so much Latika.
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Super super like this one!! That’s the spirit my friend! 😊😋
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Yes Bhavana we as mothers have to overcome our fears and give wings to our daughters
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Hi di
I read ur poems for the first time
I could relate to them on a personal level too
Beautiful
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Thanks Tulika. My group has been extremely supportive but it feels nice that my poems are being appreciated by others too.
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This is so beautifully written from the heart.
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Thank you Deepa. I had written the previous one and on reading it found it to be too negative, so wrote this one. As you rightly pointed, both from the heart. ❤️
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🙂
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oh absolutely delightful, bet she is so proud of you!
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😊 I sure am proud of her.
Thank you so much.
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It is sad that the world is like this. But it DOES make us gain in strength. I wish your beautiful and much loved dayghter well. And you too, Punam x
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Thank you kindly for your love and best wishes sweet Lorraine.
Much appreciated.
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You are welcome Punam. You are a wonderful mother
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Thanks dear. I do try.
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It comes out in your beautiful writing to your daughter
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Lots of love dear.
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Reblogged this on paeansunpluggedblog and commented:
This is the second one in the trilogy. You can read the first one here.
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And then this made me smile so much!:)
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And then I realized I was being too melodramatic. That is not how I am . So I wrote this…being true to myself.
Thank you so much :):)
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Very good!:) sometimes when things are hard when tend to withdraw. Later realizing that we are being a bit melodramatic. I’m the same.
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See, I knew we are alike in some respects! Lol
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I think so!:)
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The shift from the first one to the second one shows your desire to want to protect and with the nos, but at the same time, you want to her to have all the opportunities, adventures, and freedom to be who she is and do whatever makes her happy. No parent has all the right answers and ever only doing what they think and feel is right as they learn and grow alongside their children. 🙂
Never be too hard on yourself and always do the best you can, nobody’s perfect. My mom is now one of my best friends. We’ve always been close (even though we’ve had hiccups along the way in our relationship as growing pains were bound to happen). As a daughter I know my mom did her best, was every choice she made perfect or right, of course not, but I know she always meant well and did the best with what she had and it was a learning curve for her with each and every one of us kids. ❤️❤️ 🙂
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This is what I am actually, Jenna. 🙂
After I wrote that ( even thought it is a sad reality), I couldn’t identify with it. As a result wrote this.
Thank you so much for sharing about your mom. I am very close to my mom and hope to have the same kind of relation with my daughter. 😊
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I’m sure as she finds herself you’ll grow close. The teens and even early twenties are the time we naturally pull away to give us time to grow and find who we are as individuals. My niece is going through this with her parents. I remember her being the sweet little girl then it seemed like over night she became closed off, moody, doesn’t like anyone or anything.
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I know I have to be patient. Will keep in mind your thoughtful words and draw strength from them. 😊💕
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😊❤️
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A beautiful balance to the first piece. I think it is important to prepare them for all aspects of moving forward in this world, good and bad. Bravo, my friend!
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Thank you so much. This is the gift I would like to give my kids…the ability to soar. ☺️
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You are kindly welcome. I think you demonstrate that every day 🙂
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Aww, I am touched!☺️
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🙂
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Oh so wonderful. What a lovely mama you are.
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Thank you so much. ☺️
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❤️❤️❤️❤️ And then you swing it right back around. Beautiful.
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Had to! Somehow, the previous one sounded too pessimistic. Thank you so much. 💞
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I understand, but I would call it realistic not pessimistic. It just needed part 2!!
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Aww! That’s very sweet of you to say. 💖
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This is more like it! A courageous mother with trust in her daughter.
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Thank you, Sadje! Yes, one realises life is how one faces it.
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You’re welcome Punam. Exactly.
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I wish all mother’s teach their daughters this
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I wish so too! ❤️
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🤗❤️
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Ahhh this is so gorgeous… I see the progression in your thoughts from your last poem about your daughter to this one…. admiring her strength, her fortitude, like her Mum’s no doubt ❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, my dear! This is the actually me, most of the time! It is no use fearing the worst. We have to meet some fears head on! ❤️❤️
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We do!!! But doesn’t mean it’s easy. I think it’s hard to be kind to ourselves as parents sometimes ❤️❤️
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